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for The Forever Game

by uqui

schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is getting more and more interesting. What a change it makes when V reigns in his impulses rather than just lashing out or charging in.
As for what v is... no clue, except that he's not vampire. Do Dark Elves, Naga and so on exist in this continuum?
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful hot and intriguing as always Jade. You are amazing at this. Now for my guess as a creature I'm going to go for the obvious and say Naga
schedule August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really good start. I can't wait to see the twist you've put on this, even if you hadn't intended for a plot. :)

xoxo,
kitkat
schedule August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*gasps as she surfaces from the smut fest and looks around blinking. Man but you write brilliant smut. having had a brief foretaste I now feel down right teased. I know there's more and even better to come so I'm now pulling a mental Sonic the Hedgehog, arms crossed, gaze irked and feet tapping in impatience. :P I want mooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrr!
ehem. Even though the smut was great, i look forward to seeing how we got to this point, cause you can really feel the love V has for his mate. I think the back story is going to be most interesting. How will Horcrux's and Hallows play into things... and prophesies.
schedule July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, admittingly though I was a little confused...but I can't wait for the next chapter.