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by uqui

schedule August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I have to say that this is by far one of the BEST Voldemort/Harry stories I have ever read!! I must say that you have written this story so beautifully so far and I eagerly await the next chapter. I just what to thank you for taking your time to write and post this amazing story! I had been looking for a new Voldemort/Harry story for a while now but thanks to u, my search is over! Thank You again!

Kitsune
schedule August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter! Ok my guess: lich? I know I suck at this but I still wanna guess lol. Until the next chapter!
person blue waterlilly
schedule August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love all your stories. And this is a wonderful addition to their ranks.

I have three guesses. Medusa, Manticor, and king cobra.
schedule August 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating so quick! The ritual scene was just wow. So bad ass! Totally reminded me of the Mesoamerecian sacrificial rituals. I know I'm not gonna be the one to get the right answer for this but I'm gonna keep guessing anyways. Gotta have some fun with this :p Umm... fey?
schedule August 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
true, but this time its in context and makes much more sense. So, V has at least two Horcurx at there besides the Har crux and Har has a Vcrux? Well, damn, poor Nev. Used as a foil to mask his intent over Har. I guess Ill just have to wait and see with the others since i have no clue what V could be.
schedule August 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yeah had a feeling that Naga wouldnt be the choice, but had to get the obvious out of the way. Alright so obviously the snake speaking isn't a clue, since he could easily
Inhetited that from Slytherin line. Not many dark creatures are immortal, I'm still convinced he's not a vampire so my next guess would be a dark elf, not a drow obviously but something along that line.
person Me
schedule August 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Glad you didn't kill off his parents as I wondered why he wasn't more concerned about that. My guess this time is Chimera.
schedule August 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Tried reviewing first chapter but it didn't work so I'm gonna squish both in here. I read Weapon and that was a great story, though it was "plot heavy" as you termed it. You're a phenomenal author so I know I'll love this story too. First chapter was awesome. Totally hooked me. Hot! Second chapter was even better. The reworking of the prophecy was believable. Imagery was fun with the Voldemort's vision of Harry and a cherry wood desk. Hope you use that one! If it was possible the sex scene in the second chapter was even hotter that the first. Ok so first guess is gonna be vampire. I have to cover my bases before I try anything else. Thanks for writing and until the next chapter!
person she-who-waits-in-darkness
schedule August 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Is he a naga?
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like! I am waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter.
My guess for Voldemort's creature is naga.
Keep up the good work! :-D