rate_review Reviews

Really interesting story. Unfortunately, it is also incredibly frustrating. While I'm sure you have many readers focused primarily on the smut, I'd hope there are just as many of us focused on the plot. I was mostly fine with ignoring the bracketing smut in favor of the fascinating plot flashbacks, but it's getting a bit ridiculous. I'm fairly certain you've exceeded the sexual performance tolerances of the humanoid shape, regardless of what 'creature' Riddle might be. Additionally, the pacing is a bit slow. I'm going to try to stick with this because I really want to know how Tom and Harry got to this point. I want to know if James and Lilly know of and approve of this relationship. I want to see Dumbles GE his butt kicked. So much potential here - please try to pay that as much attention as you do the sex.

My guess: cambion (human mother, demon father)

Draken

Dude... No one has guessed demon yet... Thats my guess
Nice chappie as always :D

I'm normally not a fan of this ship but I have got to tell you that I really, really love this fic.

Is he part BAsilisc?

I really do like this fic. I was wondering is he by any chance a Goa'uld

was that a typo i saw? ringing rather than wringing?
At anyrate. oooh, the plot thickens. I should have guessed dumbles would be OtH (other than human). It would certainly explain his lack of regard for human lives. Does he share a species with V or just immortality. this chappie seemed to suggest that they shared a speicies but i'm just double checking.
This chappie also intimated that har wasn't yet immortal?

I really loved this chapter...and I can't wait for more.

This most recent chapter has been revealing.. but I have no idea.. and the made invalid guesses make me wonder if he is nephilim... but meh I'm posting more because I love the story and look forward to each chapter. Keep it up please.