Found your story to be beautifully and "hotly" written!! Yes I know it's not a word, don't give a shit, it's still an appropriate description (in my opinion)!! Loved it and will recommend it to anyone who enjoys HP-verse with lots of slash smut with a side of plot to carry it! 🙂♥ï¸ðŸ™‚♥ï¸ðŸ™‚♥ï¸ðŸ™‚♥ï¸
Having read this first chapter, I was surprised but also very confused. As I didn't know when they had gotten together, or that fact when they found out they were each other's mate. But I enjoyed it, and congratulate you on a job well done, it was very well written. And the sex scene was very well written, so I loved it even more. I'd love to read more of your works.
Review on chapter 9 my guess is Bella, Rudolphus, Rabastion, and Barty