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I don't think your liking for knickerless Hermione is appropriate here; a modest pair of plain knickers would suit her virginal status better, and Draco could keep them as a trophy. You could still have her shaved as something for Draco to mock, as she could do that for hygiene reasons.

A follow on story would certainty be interesting: Who will find her? What will everybody's reaction be? Will she be able to tell what happened? Will Draco be caught by other means? Is she pregnant? How will she recover? Will she have sex with anybody else?

interesting start cant wait to see where you take this.i know it's cliche but this would actually be a good story for hermione to end up pregnant with a horrible reminder of that night..