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for Beyond the Pale

by goldhorse

schedule May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, nice ending hun. Can't wait to read the epilogue though I am sad to know its over! Glad so many people made it and I loved the twist with Charlie. I am curious as to what side effects he will have.
person Cat
schedule May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So sad this is the end but it was a great read! Can't wait for the last bit, and I hope they make it through.
person anaidra
schedule April 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, glad that they had some fun and enjoyed themselves. :)
But...please tell us it was only a joke and there is more than two chapters left!!!
schedule April 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
TWO CHAPTERS?! NOOOOO!!!!!!!! I don't want it to end.... :( *sniffle* I want to curl up under a blanket and be able to read it forever and ever and ever and ever... lol
schedule April 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Only two more chapters?! Wow...well, either way, can't wait to read more! Great chapter hun, too bad everyone's fun had to be cut short, they needed the break.
person Kimbovet
schedule April 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
At least everybody had a good time & let off steam before the upcoming confrontation with Voldemort. Sad to see the story ending so soon but i have enjoyed it greatly so far.
person Morgan
schedule April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this for a while now and I'm hooked!!!!! can't wait for the next installment SO AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
schedule April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a wild ride! This is an awesome story and I can't wait until it's finished.
schedule April 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
All hail the queen! lol This night should be interesting. lol Hell, maybe Won-Won and Lav-Lav will have some lewd, public display of affection. *vomits over keyboard* lol
person Cat
schedule April 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
you shouldn't hate this, its good. Plus this post helped further everything, next chapter sounds like it'll be fun and interesting. can't wait.