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for Beyond the Pale

by goldhorse

schedule September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
My god, the new chapter is fucking amazing!!! (Pun only half intended) I really hope this keeps her safe....

Congrats on the job! Sorry about the shoulder break.... Sounds so painful.... :(
person misty
schedule September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
YOU GOT A JOB!!!! YAY!!!! Seriously though congrats on that. And the shoulder break sucks. I'm so sorry. Keep up the good work!
schedule September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm new at this website, how can I get updates when another chapter is up?
schedule September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! Broken bones? geez that was one rough session. Looking forward to the non-bone breaking possible BDSM scenes ;) In fact, i'm rereading bound just for that purpose hehe. Keep them coming. I absolutely love this
person Sincerely
schedule September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I totally thought your story was 12 chapters.... I have been completely engrossed by it for about the last three hours! I absolutely love, love, love the relationships and the plot line you have come up with. And holy shit! Your smut! Phenomenal, and trust me, I know good smut when I read it. When I got to the end of the 11th chapter I was so ready to push next, but it wasn't there! I was so bummed! Please update soon, you talented, brilliant you!
P.S. You can tell I mean it from my name
person Lifvared
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this is the first time i've ever reviewed to you but I couldn't stand it anymore. I've read you story since it's second chapter and it's bloody brilliant, this last chapter was just over the top. You're an awesome writer, please keep on with the good work because you're doing great. The plot is magnificent, the perfomance of the characters beyond perfect, I really, really want to read the end of this story because it's just awesome. Don't make us wait too much because it's unbearable.

Xoxo,
Lifvared
person Track45
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I was a little sad to see how short it was but with a speedy update I think I can overlook it lol. I can't wait to read more again soon.
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It was short, but full of Draco and Hermione goo, which made me happy! :D I hope everything's okay.... Family emergencies are never easy. Take care, okay?
person DB1
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
@11 yay!! Update soon

DB
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I think that was a realistic make-up. I'm glad they got to talk things out. I like this Draco lots. But i must say you are cruel with teasing us with the idea of a claiming and then ending the chapter *scoffs* really woman! :) Can't wait for the next