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for Beyond the Pale

by goldhorse

person Track45
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was excited to see that this story was updated this morning. I can't wait for more!
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!! ohh amazing as always! hehehehe that was a very hot chapter, i cant wait to see the "sweet" side of severus when he talks to melody! well if he has a sweet side that is! i'll be waiting for the next installment!!
person Sincerely
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love your story, your writing, you!! Please update soon, but don't push yourself too hard
person Kimbovet
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was HOT!!! ooo ooo ooo! *hand raised* I want to know what the Draco dildo special feature is. :-P KUTGW!
schedule September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG I'm so glad I decided to read this! It was well worth it but I'm so mad it ended then!! Update soon!
person Kimbovet
schedule September 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant as always!!! Glad Draco & Hermione are mated now & Remus & Hermione have called a truce. Sirus is such a nasty prick in this story but I hope you try to redeem him somehow, for Harry's sake. Happy to hear about the new job & sorry about he family member with the bum shoulder.
schedule September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
fantastic chapter, excited to read more
person Track45
schedule September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter of course. I love this story. I look forward to finding it updated every time I check the site. Congrats on the job! I just hope this story doesn't get left behind in the wake of everything. Looking forward to reading more, hopefully soon!
person colao
schedule September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wonderful fun!
schedule September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! Broken anything hurts and with you equating that to a broken back, I can imagine how it feels, having fractured my spine this summer. I wish whoever it was a speedy recovery!

As to the story, great chapter! Can't wait for the next. There was a couple things I noticed. An extra "at" somewhere, though I will be damned if I can't find it now. And you used "then" and when I think you meant "them" when Draco was feasting on Hermione's chest.

Great job! A pleasure to read your work as always.