rate_review Reviews

I love this story!I think its the first vamp one for HP that I have fully enjoyed. Please don't stop

This. Was.AMAISING! I read few of you your stories and they ar wall amassing! You really have gift for writing :)

I'm still impressed with this story. I usually lose interest before now. But this story is still a great story. Can't wait to read more!

@14. Again another hot chapter. I'd definitaly buy one of those toys they sound amazing!!!
Update soon

DB

Happy that Remus knows about Severus now; he'll be a great help for Severus & Hermione. I love your Harry in this story. He's so much less angsty since Sirius is back & he'll do just about anything for Hermione. Know all about not feelig good. I've been sick for a wee & a half & reading your stories alwways make me feel better for a little while.

UPDATE UPDATE PLLLLLLEASE!!! im itchin for the next chapter!!

Love it! Absolutely cannot wait to see what the surprise is with it. I have some guesses, but knowing you and your writing, it will be better than I imagined! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

@13
Omg so hot!!!! Panting with happiness right now. Update another delicious chapter!!!

DB

Wicked chapter, love the "surprise" ending XD Typical Draco. I am going to guess and say that it allows him to actually control it, maybe even feel through it. Perhaps even it showing a version of him attached to it. Also, poor Sev, that had to be hard to hear, but he needed it. Can't wait till the next chapter!

Couple things to point out. When they are having sex after their little talk in the room and you have Draco's fingers slipping between them, you ended the sentence on the word "mashed" and though it was obvious he went for her clit, it was still odd. Also, when he is fingering her in the club while they watch Sev and Melody, you used "once" instead of "one" flick and in the same sentence you use "drown" which I think should have been "drowned."

YAY this is great thankyou :D