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Hi there this fic is awesome :) you are an amazing writer. since I can't actually message you which is upsetting I figured I'd just ask in here Lol. could you write a Fred weasley and Hermione story? I can't find that many of them and the ones I have been really good but I love your writing with the draco Hermione ones I figured I would ask. :)

Just finished this story. As with ALL of your stories...I LOVED IT!!!! Now, I think I have read everything you have written, up to and including the latest; Mistletoe. I can't wait for more. And if you ever decide that you will finish that original novel, I would be more than happy to beta it for you. I finished my first one in November 2013 and am now editing it *ugh*. If you would be interested in being a beta for a science fiction romance...I would LOVE your input(eclectic_pet@yahoo.com). Until your next fiction...More, please!!!

LOVED this story!!! Great writing, great premise. Loved the relationships formed between the whole coven! Great read!

I remember your story from the very beginning, and I just realized a few nights ago that I had never finished it. So, I did the only thing I could think of; I tracked your story down (not difficult) and finished it. Goldhorse, you are amazing, and a very talented writer. I loved your story, and I even felt emotions at the end. i only really feel at the end of good stories. Thank you for your strength, and it looks like you've been through some hard times, judging by your updates. Good luck to you with all your endeavors in life; you have great talent, and a seemingly wonderful personality.

This is the first time I have reviewed on this site and I must tell you, when I first started reading I couldn't stop. I literally read all 40 chapters in one sitting. I was completely useless to the outside world. I haven't been this enthralled since the books first came out. You deserve much more than just kudos for that amazing plot like with just the right amount of smut. Honestly this is the best thing I have read in at least 2 years.
You're an amazing author and have amazing OC characters. Thank you for your wonderful story and please, if you write anything else let me know!

Fabulous story.

First i have to say it's a wonderfull story which i enjoy. Reading through the chapter i notice a slight 'wrong' thing in the Hermione and Draco dominant thing. Hermione turned Draco if i read correct and as the mother of Draco her will has to be obeyed by Draco. Now with the mating with Draco he can if she wants command her but if Hermione commands Draco he has to obey (which btw the turning of Draco is the only way to make Hermione mate with him was believe able to me then without the turning)
Just continue with this great story i thought i just comment on the commanding part and will keep reading YOUR story!

With kind regards,
Johannes

*cries bloody tears of joy and sorrow* I LOVED THIS STORY ALL THE WAY!!!! WHY DID YOU END IT SO HAPPILY?!?!?!?! THEY'VE ALL GOT SUCH BEAUTIFUL FAMILIES AND I LOVE THEM!!!!!!! (Apparently I need sleep.... So glad you wrote this story. It's worth re-reading again and again and again.)

I'm usually greatly disappointed and irritates with epilogues, but this one was really great. I loved the pairings and the fact that you had all the vampire couples adopt kids who needed homes.

A fitting end and I adored this story. I'm always up for a sexy Severus and a drool-worthy Draco. Well done.