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for Beyond the Pale

by goldhorse

person Kimbovet
schedule October 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed the update! I hope Hermione gets a chance to beat the crap out of Sirius at some point. That would be truly great!!! I also hope you you do have Hermione tell Ginny the truth. She could use another friend she can confide in. Looking forward to the next update.
person Track45
schedule October 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So I had a really shitty week this week. My apartment was broken into and my laptop, camera, and TV were stolen. I found out my insurance will barely cover anything for them. I lost $20. But then I got on here and saw this story was updated. I was beyond excited. I love this story. I wish you could update quicker though but I am incredibly impatient. Lol. Anyway, awesome job. Keep on going!
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh i squealed with delight when i saw that you had updated!! back to school, cant wait to see what you have planned next! please update soon because you have me hooked!! as always your awesome!!
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wicked chapter. Poor Hermione though, that was a rough first day! I certainly hope things get better, but well, they always get worse first eh? Glad Melody is there to help them!
person Saphirephoenix
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! What a lovely way to start out my day. Poor Hermione and Draco; it is going to be difficult to get their lessons at Hogwarts with their collars not working....Ah, well. Challenges make for good character developement.

I hope that Sirius can redeem himself, but if you want to keep him the bullying prat-I'll understand.
person DB1
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
@16 Ron's a dick and so is Sirius I see him becoming a problem! Please update soon

DB
person EmiilyRae96
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is great I reaaaallly looove it!
schedule October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please please update!!! love this story i need my next fix of it!! :) updatttte!!!
person buttercup
schedule October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh please update soon i truly am enamored by this story and can not wait to see what happens next..
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!! I've been waiting for Remus to be fully informed! He makes for an excellent friend! He's so sweet.... :3 Although... he'll probably threaten Draco if he gets even the slightest hint of insincerity.... They'll but heads a bit, won't they...?