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for Beyond the Pale

by goldhorse

person Track45
schedule October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
One of my favorite parts of this story is that you continue to develop the relationship between Hermione and Draco. A lot of other Dramione fics I've read have a fast development and then its done. This one though continues to build and I like that. Yet another impressive chapter. Can't wait for more.
person Saphirephoenix
schedule October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Bad Author! Bad, evil author! You tease...cliffie action is hard enough, but cliffie sex? It's not like any of us are going to stop reading if you give us instant gratification, you know.

Kareoke singing vampires...I love it.
person Foreva2000 or Aloce
schedule October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
There is a long story for my a sense but I won't bore you with it....I don't usually check the author names on here, I just read anything thats good. The first chapter pulled md in and as soon S I read the name Melody Bach I knew it was you :D I still needa catch up on a few Bound stuff and such but I think that'll be my Xmas treat bc I have school again next week, anyway, it has been a long time. Your writing is still as amazing as ever so I'm guessing not much has changed? ;D

(Also I can't remember which name I used last time when I use to read Biund, so I threw both possibilities into it ;D)
schedule October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just love the whole vampire angle on Draco and Hermione! Good job! Although I must admit that I've grown to love the whole Bound concept more. I just can't wait for the next chapters for both Fooling Fate AND Beyond the Pale. Please hurry!!!

P.S. Even if it takes you some time to update your stories, I will still hopelessly wait for them like a little obedient puppy. Much love! <3
person Kimbovet
schedule October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
About time Severus/Melody got a clue that they love each other & now Drco/Hermione are coming to that decision for themselves. Looking forward to the punishment. ;-)
schedule October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love all the songs you picked out. "Baby Mine" Is one of my favorite songs ever. I have it on cd by Bette Middler. Great song...Anyways, there was one little error I found in the story. In the sentences
person Krystal
schedule October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't read this fast enough. I loved every second of it and got sad when I reached the end. This has developed into one of my favorite Hermione and Draco stories ever. Seriously. I love their interaction. I can't wait to see what you come up with next, though the punishment should be quite interesting.
schedule October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I. JUST. FUCKING. LOVE. YOU.

You are the best fanfiction writer that I have ever encountered. Your mastery in weaving your plots into the canon is just bloody and brilliantly magnificent. I cannot wait until I get to the next chapters! Please please PLEASE finish this along with Fooling Fate. I just lalaLOOOVE all of your works. I can never really say it enough, but I will continue nevertheless. :3

If I ever get the chance to meet you in person, I will seriously worship at your feet. You are AWESOME.
person Night Owl
schedule October 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! Just started and stayed up all night to read what's up so far... can't wait to see how Draco reacts to this last bit! :)
person Amy
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job, keep up the excellent work. Can not wait for the next chapter, I'll be checking back every day!!