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for Beyond the Pale

by goldhorse

person Kimbovet
schedule December 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Now that was hot!!! Poor vampy couple indeed. :-)
person lely92
schedule December 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hi im new to adult fanfiction and your story was the first ive read and i have really enjoyed it and cant wait to read more now i just need to find a way to keep track of it could give me a hint on that lol hope you update soon.
schedule December 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHHH!!!!! I FINALLY get caught up and you leave me with this?! What are you trying to do?! Kill me with excitement?! D: It's okay, though! I love the torture! :D
person Sapphire Phoenix
schedule December 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Milady, keep this up and by the time you finish these two fics, your inner child should be as secure as Hermione on a bondage wheel! We love you (notice how much when you are looking on how many hits each of your stories have).
person Krystal
schedule December 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. Well done on that tense fight scene. I feel so bad for them. That was quite a scuffle.
schedule December 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wait Robert character? Where the heck did that name come from? Did I miss something? o.O >.< Great chapter though.
person DB1
schedule December 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
@22 wow exciting drama filled chapters. Can't wait for more.

DB
schedule November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ABANDON YOU!!? NEVER!! I love your story far to much to ever not check to see if you've updated. I like where you're going, though I don't really know where that is :) But I'm thoroughly enjoying the ride!! Can't wait for the next update, hopefully it will be sooooon!?
schedule November 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. I hope they can do something for the old woman. Sort her mind out, dim the memories, something to give her some peace. Maybe fix up the orphanage too if there are still children about. Nothing like a sudden and very generous anonymous donation. I only found one mistake and that was the use of "classes" instead of "glasses" when Melody was filling them with blood at the dinner table. Looking forward to more as always.
person Kimbovet
schedule November 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I applaud your muse for being so busy. :-) Looks like Harry & Ginny may be too observent for Hermione to keep all her secretsaway from them. Poor Madam Blotts; hopefully some good will come to her in the near future. Looking forward to the club & the cave.