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for Beyond the Pale

by goldhorse

person Sabrina
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love love love this story!!! seriously one of the best fan fiction I have ever read.
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is such an amazing story! I have no words that accurately describe just how blown away I am at it. I've just read the whole thing so far in one hit. Love it!
person DB1
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@25. Ron's a dick! Great chapter. Update soon

DB
person Krystal
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful to see this story updated. I have been checking periodically so I wouldn't miss it. I have to say that there was something really great going on in this chapter. Not one thing I could put my finger on in particular, but just the general flow maybe. Seeing your AN at the end in that it came easily to you made sense to me. I got that feeling right from the beginning. This might be my favorite chapter so far just because I could tell you enjoyed writing it. Well done. Happy to see you back. Thanks!
schedule January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You're back! Great chapter. I feel bad for Hermione but she had a point. That was a really selfless thing for her to do. I am amazed at how horrible Harry and Ginny reacted to her. Maybe she should have told them what Ron said. But still, there was no real damage done to him. And Harry should feel bad because it's his fault for letting Ron use the map in the first place when he knew there were things Hermione needed kept secret, like what she is and being around Sev all the time, and that Ron would see that. Hope you had a great holiday and new year. Can't wait to read more!
schedule January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH YES!! An update!! And what an amazing chapter at that! LOOOOVED it!! Excited to see what they will do next!! UPDATE SOON I HOPE??!!?
person Kimbovet
schedule January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hurray for the update!!! Well I hate that Ron acted like a total git but I really didn't expect anything else from him. Now Harry & Ginny, I expected better from them. I really hope Hermione's luck changes to the better soon or she's not gonna make it.
person Alice
schedule January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You're perfect for Procastination, I have 4 days till my exam and what am I doing? Reading fanfiction...I'm so hooked on this story! I basically shut down when Deriks - the real ones - head was revealed, my wife was shocked at my outburst but..yeah, it was powerful :///
schedule January 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
please please update!!
person kit
schedule December 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amazing as always just caught back up with this one. I love how you have to family set up! Happy holidays can't wait for more on either story !