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for Beyond the Pale

by goldhorse

schedule January 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Those two really really do need a break lol. Have Christmas holidays happened yet? I can't remember for some reason. If not, maybe they could take a little vacation and just get some time to themselves. Even a short time would be good for them I think. Give them a chance to relax, reconnect etc. Great chapter by the way, it's always nice to "kill two birds with one stone" lol I have to wonder how Sev would react to knowing that Harry has his book. I mean, we get to see a brief bit in the movie, having most likely figured it out when Harry uses that spell on Draco, but I don't see that happening in this one as he knows Draco is on their side and with Dray being a vamp and all, I don't see him braking down in the bathroom. Though, I wouldn't put it past Sev to have known all along that he had the book, maybe even putting it in the cupboard himself or something. Either way, can't wait to read more!
person Kimbovet
schedule January 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I definitely think we need an interlude soon so those 2 can "unwind" a little & maybe have Sirius & Melody discuss some things. KUTGW!
schedule January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! And Ron-bash away! :D I like Ron and all, but he is a hot head and needs to be taken off his high horse. lol If Harry is understanding, once they've explained everything, it'll be enough of a break for the moment. :) They need at least a tiny one. Please? *bat eyelashes* Just one teensy weensy little break...?
person white dragon
schedule January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
thank you so much for this story. it has become my monday go to for "happiness". The story (actually all of your stories) are riveting with such wonderful twists and turns. thank you and please keep up the great work!
person Kimbovet
schedule January 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great way for Ginny & Harry to find out about Draco! I firmly believe both of them will accept Draco & Hermione's relationship. Of course Harry will probably yell some & not trust Draco completely but Ginny & Hermione will set him straight. I feel sorry for Ron when Ginny gets to him...well not really. KUTGW!
person DB1
schedule January 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@25 great chapter. Update soon!!

DB
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Love the twist with the hunter. It's about time Ginny and Harry found out. At the very least I think Gin can accept it, Harry, probably would if only for Hermione's sake. Plus, it will give him a bit of a break from fretting all the time lol. Can not wait to read more!
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story....the characters are well developed and the plot line is thought out with attention to detail which a lot of writers miss. Honestly I can't wait for the Ron bashing :) I do like Ron but not when he is a jealous, pig-headed brut which he usually is instead of thinking logically and listening to reason.
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Found this the other day, put all other stories I'm reading on hold so I could get caught up and now I can't wait for an update! I love this!
person steve
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
sorry hate this chapter, why do you like writing ron freaking out, did he freak out when he found linpin was a warewolf, only beccouse he was talking to sirus, mass murder, did he freak out when vadormore was comeing after harry no. so it get tired to read of ron freak out that ooc, and you seem to do it so he out of her life, for some reason you have a hard time writting a draco and hermoine story where ron her best friend, and