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I'm, well, behind. This review is for chp 6....


I feel so bad for Snape right now! I can certainly guess what methods the demons used. As much as he wants Harry, that must have hurt like hell.

reviewing chp seven...

No need to be nervous, you're doing fine. No need to rush the plot either. You may feel it's moving slowly, but things need to develop; and a rushed plot would leave readers confused. Also, there isn't really a need to announce pov changes. It's pretty clear whose mind or conscience (which ever makes sense) we're in with in your writing itself. We readers shouldn't get confused. You do a good job keeping that clear.

I loved that scene in Severus' office. Good thing she hadn't completely interrupted him, lol. That could have been awkward. ;)

Harry put everything in that pensieve. I'm so proud of him, lol. I can't remember; does Snape know about his childhood yet? Hm, could get real interesting when he "sees" all that if not. Oh and the trial! How will he get out of going to Askaban? Oh, I so look forward to the next update! Hopefully I'll be able to read it and not get behind again! ;)

*cries about having to wait for mroe* and somehow i managed to miss chap 7 and had to go back and read it. and oh my, *fans self* nice to see sev finally give in to those urges of his even if only by himself. and harry's little moment of freedom with the broom and wand were cute. hopefully those two can learn to bend a little when it comes to dealing with the other. keep up the great work :)

oh more please so did ff.net delete your stories? I tried to find youon there but there are no stories... let me know thanks

poor guys, both stubborn and strong willed and aggravated with their position in life and having to find a way to coexist with each other. wonder work, keep it up :)

FAN!~

yay for more! and harry finally got to find out one of snape's bigger secrets. and yeah, poor snape deff deserves a drink after all that. keep up the good work :)

I really like how you are true to Snape and his past. I love a good fanfiction, but most bore me. This one, though, I look for a couple times a day. I like the detail and the gradual progression in Harry's and Snape's changing attitudes. Please don't adandon it.

Oh, man! What a way to leave it! I am really enjoying this story. I look forward to the next chapter!