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person delia cerrano
schedule October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just when I think Harry is getting somewhere you end the chapter!
person delia cerrano
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Opps! Now that he has touched the deatheaters mark what happens? Does it burn him? Does he jump back & run?
I want more Snape/Harry please. They seem to be just dancing around each other because why.. besides being afraid to show each other how they feel? I think I'm maybe missing something.
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I love the steamy kisses... really really love them. I hope they start spending more time with each other and becoming familiar with each other. I think Snape especially needs that in order to get used to someone who cares about him in an intimate way. He's probably not used to anyone wanting to be in that role so he will probably still have doubts when Harry isn't with him.

And what about when the demons are gone!? Will Snape try to let go of what was started with Harry in order to let Harry get back to his real life? It is probably easier for Severus to allow things to happen away from Hogwarts but what about when they return?

And what about when the demons are gone... they are back at Hogwarts... and Voldemort still needs vanquished??!! Arrrggg!!!! My brain is going to have a melt down!

Please write more soon :)
person delia cerrano
schedule September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh Rats! They still aren't on the same page...well not on the we are staying away from understanding each other or sharing page anyway.
schedule September 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
kiss? a kiss next chapter? *bouncing up and down* yeah!!! and I really liked what Harry said to Severus in the bar :)
schedule September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh noooooo!!!! is more of Harry's memories gone? is he now mentally at a younger age???
and I don't want snape giving himself to the demons either!!! arrrgggg!!!!!!!!!
schedule August 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! I love this story and want to read more!!!
schedule August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awww... I wanted Snape to know that Harry could have been in Slytherin.
schedule August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
poor harry and his raging hormones and poor snape having his privacy invaded...not to mention his own raging hormones lmfao. so glad to see more so soon. and poor harry trying to find a way to be nice while snape is being aggressive cause of how he really feels. lupin's going to have a fun night with those two. keep up the great work, cna't wait for more :)
person Mizukotsu
schedule August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, where to even start?

Okay, so I was not a member of this site until just now. I was often a visitor, but never felt the need for an account. After having read your story so far (which I just finished doing), I had to make an account so I could leave a review!

This is wonderfully written, I found it extremely difficult to stop to make dinner! You mentioned that you hoped you were doing a good job with Snape, and you truly are. I can honestly say this is one of the best Snarry fics I've ever read. I can't wait for the next chapter! -wriggles- More, please! Haha.

Once again, beautiful work. Many hugs of appreciation for you!

Mizu