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by lordoberon

schedule January 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I just spent the day reading this.
My god it was brilliant
person Jags
schedule February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful!
schedule October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh.... I so loved reading this! And I am so glad you finished it! One of my favorite things was how Harry shared his memories with Snape. Though Severus never did find out that Harry was supposed to be in slytherin. Truly a wonderful story. :)
person delia cerrano
schedule October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a good satisfying end of a story!! Have a good safe trip. Maybe you'll get lots of ideas for new stories & maybe even get the urge to write a few pages. If you do don't feel like you have to hold back on our account.
person delia cerrano
schedule October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Still trying to understand the last bit of the chapter.
person delia cerrano
schedule October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good ending chapter? I would love to see a follow up epiloge. Something that shows how Harry & Severus are making out







That was a good last chapter! I'm looking forward to the epiloge for sure. I want to see how things are working out for Harry & Severus...personal & work/friends. They were starting to be so lovingly snarky to each other it was adorable!!
Harry was dragging Sev into the current century kicking & screaming all the way but Sev was giving Harry something he never had..a person who loved him deeply devotedly..someone who thinks he is the center of his universe.




















person delia cerrano
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hope there is more conversation/interaction between Severus & Harry in the next chapter. Looking forward to the fast chapter postings you wrote about.
person delia cerrano
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What is wrong with that Severus! For Petes' sake! Give Harry a chance.
person delia cerrano
schedule October 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Reread and reenjoyed this story. Can't wait for between Sev and Harry. And hope we get rid of the demons real soon! Don't like them.
person ashestodust
schedule October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What an evil cliffhanger. I'm sorry I didn't review your story until now. I hope you continue it, because I'm addicted. I really enjoy the way that you've written Severus, the way you blend his strong emotions with his mask of apathy is well written. A lot of people have too much of one or the other, and that always annoys me lol.