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for The Terror of Ending Forever

by TibbytheWitchy

person yaoified
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Luv this story! I think the baby should be a girl, I like "Lilyth" for the name. Harry would love it because she was named after him mom and it's formal enough that Draco would love it.

But if it should be a boy, I think "Leo"... Not only does it hold with the Black tradition but it's common enought that Harry would be fine with it. And lets be honest, this baby, getting taken away, is a fighter! What better way to say that then to name him after a lion.
person lockheart
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story it is so sad and ssweet. As for the baby I hope it is a little girl.
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope Harry kills that guard! And punishes every last one of those healers who took the baby! I vote for a little boy, and stick to Scorpius, I like that name! Please let them find the baby safe and sound! And please make sure that Ginny and all those so-called "friends" pay severely!
person djaddict
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Your plot bunnies are running rampant aren't they?

Get your authorial butt back over where it belongs and finish your other stories! LOL

Like this one though. Hope Harry kicks serious ass and really hurts that guard. Alot.
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
My heart bleeds for them. Truly the suffering of Draco is immense. But I love it! Your doing a great job! I can't wait to see the search for their child! Personally my vote is for a baby girl because I love the two of them with a tiny girl child. Plus I have a name for her! I'd call her Letitia which mean joy, happiness. She'd definitely be her fathers' joy! ;-)
~Pen
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The wizarding world is lucky Harry is staying with Draco. Otherwise he'd have torn the healers' minds apart by now looking for his child. The Order had better not have it. Oh I almost feel sorry for them. Naw!!!!
person JG
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
If Draco and Harry are interested in naming their child in the tradition of the stars, what about Calix or Caelum for a boy? Tyl is also an option--specifically, Tyl is a star in the constellation Draco. They could name the baby Tyler, as a way to reference Draco's heritage in directly. Perhaps a girl might be named Lyra or Carina or Ara? If the baby is a boy, James or Jamie might be an appropriate middle name, as a reference for Harry. Jamie would also work as a first name for either gender. Eileen works as a great middle name choice (or even first name) for a girl, as a nod to Severus for all he did to support Harry/Draco and bring them back together.

Just some ideas!
person chester
schedule August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OH NO!!!! Please let me have a happy ending! Is Draco paralyzed? And I think that the baby should be a girl. Please let all who were in on this be hurt badly by Harry and Severus! Revenge is sweet!
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh they made a HUGE mistake! Might have just earned themselves a new Dark Lord. Kingsley better find Harry's child and fast! Ginny better prayer James is his son.
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Who has the baby! I'm voting for a boy. I'm thinking Caelum Sage Malfoy-Potter. Takes care of the Black tradition and honors their mothers.