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for Mediocrity

by Redkenja

schedule November 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. And if u do need a beta ill off Wht I can do to help if ur up for it but keep up the great story I look forward to the updates.
person chrystena
schedule November 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I must say when I first looked at the story I wasn't sure about the paring but with the way you wright you just have a way of drawing in the reader that just make reading a joy and I must say that I am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter have a good thanksgiving tootles for now
person kyuubichild717
schedule November 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
you mentioned Harry needs what control he can get over himself. What happens when school starts or when his mates come into the picture? Will bumbledore be at the school? what is being done about him?
schedule November 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
har is such a strong kid. he doesn't blame remi and siri for the pain at all which a lot of ppl would even though they knew it was something that was helping them. I'm glad har still has a support network.
schedule November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
boooo. i appear to have missed a few chappies. *pouts. still, i'll be happy to read them if and when you put them out.
well, i'm glad mio and weasleys are back on track and the burrow is a safe haven.
dumbles really is a prize bastard. when all is said and done and this comes out, yeah, he's got some serious karma owing. i wonder if they can transfer schools or home tutor har. i certainly wouldn't trust him back under dumbles eyes.


family is good, even when they irritate the crap out of you. that moment between har and molly in the morning was really sweet.

the pain between the three of them as they give har his treatments is heart wrenching. though, i think it helps har a bit to know the other two don't enjoy this. they want the best for him and are willing to be with him through the pain, even though he doesn't enjoy the fact this hurts them too.
person jennfier
schedule September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, love this story and can't wait to read more
person whitebuffalowmn
schedule August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good Story!! please update soon, I'd sure hate t miss an installment.

thanks

Carol
person chrissy
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
cool story!! Look forward to the next update. I hope that dumbles and co go down for what they have done to Harry and Sirius.
schedule July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So very much damage and abuse scarring to fix. I truly hope Vic will treat him kindly. Seriously, i'm wondering why they'd send har back to hogwarts at all. It plain to see dumbles means no good towards him. It made me smirk the way they ditched dumbles. That man has serious delusions of grandeur.
Well, first things first. Make a start on getting things healed up and a new life for themselves.
neh, i have a creature question. this chappie seems to hint that once har has his own pack, his parent/guardians won't be welcome. That seems kind of harsh. is it a natural growing up/distance thing or is it that his dom's won't let anyone close?
person slash_adherent
schedule July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful. I can't believe I'd missed the first 2 chapters being published but I'm partially glad because I got to read 3 in a row. I love this. So much is happening and I love the realistic side to it all. I can't wait to learn more about Harry's creature and to see the relationship between Remus and Sirius grow. Great work and I am very much looking forward to the next chapter.