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for Mediocrity

by Redkenja

person Shawna
schedule February 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sorry should have read further before asking that question.
person angeljin
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! I'm completely addicted it. Can't wait to read more.
schedule January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story. I like it a whole lot and can't wait for more.
schedule January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, I love how you written things out and how you changed a few things! :D

Can't wait for the slashy goodness to happen~! >:D
schedule January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
that'd be pretty frustrating, having your instincts driving you away from your parental figures. still, it's pretty good odds har's home pack will welcome him back with open arms once he's finished building his own pack.
yeah, i'm thinking Vic's right in there. though when V's minion or possibly even dumbles, over controlling prick bastard that he is, dumps har in the championship (provided this follows canon in that) things are going to get interesting. will vic be able to pick up if har is lying or not about being entered?
oh, dirty poo old man. compulsion spell, i'd bet on it. And the rest of them were just happy to stand aside and let him do it, too. nice to know how many ppl have har's back in hogwarts... that is to say, none at all. guess we learn of har's resistance to compulsion a bit earlier this time out.
i dread to think what goat man is going to come up with next. sooner har mates vic, the better. har's very vulnerable right now.
person shatteredheart
schedule January 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
didnt book five state that the train station was within a 30 minute walking distance? cause snuffles took the place of a missing order member.
person YanaYugi
schedule December 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story
schedule December 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i'm still a bit sad that he'll lose the bond with paddi and mooney since he didn't actually get to experience it much, but at least this means the worst of the corrective stuff is over.
he can heal mentally as well as physically. i hope that, should his mates ever discover his past, they'll be kind about it.
person Sara
schedule December 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOVE your fic so far, so pleased I found it. A bit sad that Harry will eventually treat Remus and Sirius like he does the Weasleys but that's the only thing. Can't wait for more!!
schedule November 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i'm amazed they're happy to let har go back to hogwarts considering albus machinations and the general lack of care har's experienced there. bloody hell, a nurse should have known better than to feed the skelligro stuff to har if it has such a bad effect... or is that just on his species.
At least in this one, siri has the sense not to bait kreature but then in this one, he's not trapped in grimmauld either. That's a sensible approach to the stuff there too. tossing it all out willy-nilly just seemed so incredibly wasteful.
i'm glad har's not being tossed in blind to this. the book should give him some idea of what to expect. Nor are his pack leaving him completely alone. Also wise. har still needs all the support he can get.