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September 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM
I have to say even though I wasn't a fan of the rape... I really enjoyed this story. I even enjoyed it when Dumbledore was removed as headmaster, and put in Azkaban as well as have his magic sealed. I enjoyed when Harry smashed all the windows in the hospital taking down the wards... even though he really didn't mean to take the wards down. And I think Voldemort really needs to take the stick out of his ass, because really... he needs to be brought down from his pedistal he put himself on.
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December 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome
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August 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi! dear author! Thank you for this GREAT story! :D
It's a good thing that you went along your plan of making Harry strong. Very strong. a lot of people actually like him like that as well. me for example :P
It's a good thing that you went along your plan of making Harry strong. Very strong. a lot of people actually like him like that as well. me for example :P
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July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
my apoligies for not reviewing previously...too wrapped up in the story. excellent story, something I have not seen before! going to have to check out other[?] stories by you! hope there are some there. keep up the writing!
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August 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
loving this story. hope you update soon :)
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July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
just a thought regarding things that trip me up when i'm reading a fic....
Salazar mentioned switzerland. a man who woke up after a thousand years would never think of switzerland. the first swiss confederacy did not exist until the 13th century. anybody who didn't have Binns teaching history in high school should know this. that kind of obvious historical gaff really messes up my enjoyment of a story, and that is just one example. another example which has nothing to do with your story, but which does emphasize the point: sometimes automobiles are referenced in a fic. fine, but how stupid is it to write that someone was in the backseat of a car that has no backseat. are you getting the kind of thing that i'm talking about? i skim through many craptastic fics only because i want to know what happens, however i much prefer reading a fic that was written intelligently. pleas don't take this to mean i'm calling you un-intelligent... but details like these are one of the things that separate the fics you skip through from the ones you actually enjoy and savor.
Salazar mentioned switzerland. a man who woke up after a thousand years would never think of switzerland. the first swiss confederacy did not exist until the 13th century. anybody who didn't have Binns teaching history in high school should know this. that kind of obvious historical gaff really messes up my enjoyment of a story, and that is just one example. another example which has nothing to do with your story, but which does emphasize the point: sometimes automobiles are referenced in a fic. fine, but how stupid is it to write that someone was in the backseat of a car that has no backseat. are you getting the kind of thing that i'm talking about? i skim through many craptastic fics only because i want to know what happens, however i much prefer reading a fic that was written intelligently. pleas don't take this to mean i'm calling you un-intelligent... but details like these are one of the things that separate the fics you skip through from the ones you actually enjoy and savor.
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July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh I am happy for them more please when you can thanks.
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July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow. All 16 chapters so far are amazing!