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May 29, 2024 at 12:00 AM
Ich hoffe das du bald weiter schreibst,die Geschichte ist zu gut und interessant
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May 26, 2024 at 12:00 AM
Hallo, ich liebe diese Geschichte, hoffe das du weiter schreibst
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November 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Write more it's good
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October 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I eagerly look forward to the next update!
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March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I really like this story and hope you continue with it. It feels heart warming when I read it and I really love your portrayal of Tom :) Keep up the excellent work!
Lady Facade
I really like this story and hope you continue with it. It feels heart warming when I read it and I really love your portrayal of Tom :) Keep up the excellent work!
Lady Facade
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January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've been enjoying this story. One thing: Medical personnel are usually trained to explain what they're doing ('this is going to pinch') and ask the patient to disrobe as much as necessary ahead of time. The idea that Poppy would slide her hand under Harry's pants, without asking him to take them off or saying what she was doing, seems really wrong to me. Could he instead have a flashback about being asked to take his pants off? It seems like it would work just as well.
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January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very good so far. Keep up the good job! I cant wait to read more.
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January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Been enjoying it so far
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January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
glad to see more of this, and good to see harry and sev getting closer. lol a couple of spelling errors throughout ("harry's slime figure" being one of the more amusing one). keep up the good work :)
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January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters. I think it is sweet that he is soo comfortable with Sev.
Can't wait for more.
Can't wait for more.