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October 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! I really can't wait for more, please send me an email when u update, my email is charlie-becks@manx.net thanx :)
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October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. Can't wait for more.
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October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
More please..interesting I wanna c were u go wit this
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September 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*drops to knees and clasps hands together* Please don't stop writing this story! Pretty, pretty please with sprinkles on top! (You see, I don't like cherries so I went with sprinkles, mwaha!) But seriously, this fanfiction is addicting. Yes, you have reached your goal of this being realistic and believable, especially the characters. Their personalities are not jumping all over the place and they click with the story pleasantly. The plot (so far) is quite intriguing and I actually have not seen this before, so I don't know what to expect and I'm loving every moment of it! In chapter one, when Harry was returning to the Dursley's and the Order was waiting for him, I was panicking and thinking 'They can't find out this early on!' But our lovable Harry managed to smooth his way out. I like how you managed to fit in Tonks helping Harry out without it being to awkward for them or the readers, and I agree with the clothes she got him ;) Is it odd that I completely enjoyed the scene with Snape in the Library, and Harry eating his cake 'innocently' far more than I should have? Eh, that's alright, I know I'm odd :P
I have so much more to say but the device on which I am typing this is about to die on me :o Do not fret, my dear fantastic author! There will be more reviews from me for further chapters *hint hint* Really, this is amazing, and I usually don't get attached to stories this quickly :) All the best wishes on future writings!
I have so much more to say but the device on which I am typing this is about to die on me :o Do not fret, my dear fantastic author! There will be more reviews from me for further chapters *hint hint* Really, this is amazing, and I usually don't get attached to stories this quickly :) All the best wishes on future writings!
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August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story and so unique! Please please update soon!!
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August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great story so far! Hmm... Let's see: In a 7 month period, I had 5 lovers. Not all at the same time... So, he could have had anywhere from 11-25 lovers. That's taking into account one-night stands. *shrugs*
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August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like it; hope you update soon.
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August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story please update soon
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August 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm very intrigued by this story. Cant wait to see what happens:)
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August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. Great chapter by the way. I can't wait for your next update. I really hope that Snape comes in soon. PLease update!