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for The Headmaster's Wife

by Mrs_HH

person Trelweny
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ouch. Lucius certainly didn't make things any easier for himself. Now his married, pregnant, half-Veela soulmate is hurting and rightfully ticked off at him. :sighs: Is there anyway you can have Bill find HIS soulmate? I can't bear your Lucius being in such a state, but I don't want Bill hurt either and sooner or later that's bound to happen even if nothing else progresses between Lucius and Fleur --something I find highly unlikely.

I'm glad to see Percy seems to be staying on the right side of the tracks this time. Curious about the Deputy from Durmstrang... there are so many possibilities I can't begin to guess just one. I'm just glad he and the mole in the ministry have been overheard and that much information got back to Severus. Even if it's not much at least it's Something and he'll eventually be able to put it together. Or at least be on the lookout to watch for more.

Thanks so much for writing.
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This gets more and more plotty and fascinating!
person Hannah
schedule September 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I noticed that you have been referring to Ginny as Ginerva when the correct spelling is actually GineVRa. LOVE the story so far!
person LadyFireCrab
schedule September 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It seems like it's been forever since there's been an update on this story, so I was really excited to find it yesterday. I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next.
person TheMysticalDragon
schedule September 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story so far. I like how you made Minerva more of a motherly sort to Severus, and I've thought about her the same. I hope they don't have any little bats running around soon.
person ChaosLady
schedule September 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Excellent update!
person Trelweny
schedule August 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Whew! I'm glad That's over. Well mostly. Being who they are it may come up again, but they're smart so maybe not.

Poor Lucius. I really want things to work out for him towards Happily Ever After, but is that possible? Especially in a way that wouldn't hurt Bill? I cross my fingers that not only is there a way, but that such way will be found and taken.

Thanks for writing.
person ChaosLady
schedule August 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter!
schedule August 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a lengthy one! Great chapter as always hun. I love reading more on how things are progressing. Ugh, Percy makes me just want to smack him >.< Simpering is not attractive. Hope Hermione's meditation improves and I can't wait to read more!
person ChaosLady
schedule July 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
An amusing interlude and wonderful sex scenes! I'm glad we are making progress on all fronts of the plot.