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Chapter 35. OMG!!! So exciting!

Chapter 16. OMG that lovemaking scene at the end was perfect. I liked quite a lot of things about the chapter like: cat and grandmother... Fox

Chapter 11. This story is addictive, I like it more and more. The storyline is great, I'm really curious about what happens next, it's kind of exciting and mysterious. Fox

Chapter 13. Love it! It's very funny, I do laugh most of the time. Hope you'll find someone for Lucius. Fox

Chapter 8. I'm really enjoying your story. It's very funny. I was laughing out loud when I've read, that Severus was relieved, that Draco was born blond... I also feel a little sorry for Lucius. I like Lucius. I am very pleased to see, that you saved Severus, I don't like it when he's dead. Thanks Fox P.S. I found quite a few missing commas. Just letting you know :)

Chapter 9. I have a feeling that the entity are Hogwarts' founders. Fox

Chapter 5. To this point I think your story is very fluffy and quite silly. I rather enjoy this read, it's much lighter than most of stories I've read and it has some funny moments. Thanks Fox P.S. I found quite a few typos and missing words, I know it's not very helpful of me not to point them out (oops), but if you ever decide to edit, I'm sure you'll find them all easily.

Please tell me there is more of this!!! I love it!

Wonderful last two chapters!

THANK YOU!! I actually squealed out loud when I saw you'd updated. Thank goodness I was alone. lol I am REALLY glad he finally did it and I smiled tenderly when I realized his last step was to ask her father's permission. Sweet man. I know they still have some major to face, and I am awaiting Pansy's actions to be embarrassingly stopped, but I am glad they are happy for the moment. :-) I loved his planned proposal, even if it didn't work out that way. ha ha ha I am sorry real life has gotten in the way of your writing, but I am thankful you found some time. Thank you!! HG4eva