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Sweet so sweet and sexy!!!- loved it!!!-

Nice ending! It was a cute read.

It's a pretty open ending, so you can discover if Draco actually changed. This would have been even more interesting if this had been the summer before their sixth year...

Thanks for sharing!

I like the ending! I love the last 2 chapters! I love the scheme concocted (and I assume, successfully completed) by those two regarding his father. I'd really enjoy seeing where things go in the future, too, should you decide to write a sequel. And btw--the ribbon was a nice touch. :)
SW

And then he realized: he had no idea where her clitoris was.

This cracked me up. I love that you're showing how inexperienced he is. I also like how you're keeping Draco very much in character, while adding a few layers.

Hermione is really cute in this story.

I can't wait to see how this plays out, and I hope it's a nice long fic.

Nooo, only two more chapters left! :(

Shame on Hermione for letting another boy feel her up in her exes house.

I would like to see how their relationship develops after the kidnapping. I hope it doesn't end with the sex. I'd love to see how they deal at Hogwarts or if they'd act like nothing happened.

This is a great story! I'm enjoying it very much. I love that they're taking advantage of every opportunity to be themselves around one another in different atmospheres (a restaurant, a library, a museum) that allow for different aspects of their personalities to show through and thus interact with each other in ways completely impossible to explore in the "real world". I am however concerned about the events in the first chapter. How did Lucius find out about Hermione? And at what stage in their "relationship" are they at that point?
Please come back soon and post more!
Thanks for sharing!
SW

Wow. this is so good. It starts out with you thinking Hermione will be unwilling but with all the flashbacks we find out that might not be the case... I can't wait for the last chapter!

I love to read interesting plots and story development and this story is just that! Goo job!

Just seems a bit young to be having sex toys

I think this is the firs time I've ever read a cute sex scene, and I mean the actual sex part, lol.

It was perfect for a first time. I lol'ed when Draco pulled his fingers out and then couldn't find the hole.

a very fun ride! obliviating Lucius would be rather satifisfing :)