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August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
@20 poor hermione!! Please update soon!
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August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think you're very young. Your writing shows immature in technique and content.
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August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think you're very young. Your writing shows immaturity in technique and content. HOWEVER, that's okay. Because these flaws fade away with time and experience (as long as we are aware of them). I suspect that in five years, this will be the type of story you look back on and groan at. But hopefully, at that time, you'll still be writing. And you'll have had some more experience in the relationship department. This is a good foundation. You can form a plot, commit to it, and execute. You have a lot of promise. So, anyway, please for give me for my condescension, and best of luck in your writing future.
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August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
@18. Aww first fight. Please update soon
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August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved the updates, thank you so much for writing and sharing.
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August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
@17. Great story. Really enjoying it. Keep the chapters coming!!
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August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awww Im in NYC, wish I'd run into them lol. This fic is so cute!
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August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh super hot, and not at all surprising Glover figured out Hermione was enamored of Snape. Hermione always did wear her heart on her sleeve!
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August 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
@14. I love this story!! Keep updating!!
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August 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
@13. Great chapter. Update soon
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