AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for The Distance In Your Eyes

by Pfeifenkraut

person Celestialuna
schedule July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome start of story!
person Celestialuna
schedule July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
person Celestialuna
schedule July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is very similar to one i read a while back. Is this a re write. if it is, watch those typos. I spotted three or four already. also, har is known for thinking outside the box but I supposed he was panicked he wouldn't think of it. It's a well, dah, thing though. If nothing effects the wolf, effect the environment around it. even Fen would struggle with hanging in the air by a paw or being swatted into a spell dug hole by a spell summoned branch.