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Know its being nearly a decade since this has being updated, but desperatly hopeing there is a version out there somewhere, that has being. Anyone know?

Please say u r continuing this fic

Send me update notification if u can please 

Hey,

I just found this story and I am so happy.

I love the pairing, I love the storyline, I love everythging about this.

I am looking forward to see how good or how bad Harry will act on his first moon.

I hope this story will continue soon. :)

hey just finished reading this story and i thought it was amazing i loved it i am so curious as to how fenrir made it inside and what is going to happen next i am waiting for your next chapter

I absolutely love this. I haven't met many fenrir/harry stories I'm captivated by, but this works great!

I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! please update! I'm looking forward to the rest of the chapters!

Happy halloween really???. is Happy Christmas and New Year omg please updated i love the story I read it in 3 days pleaseee =D

Really? We wait that long for a chapter, and nothing. happens. Nothing happened in this chapter. Nothing. They talked for a minute, that's it. You might as well have not put this chapter out at all if you weren't even going to try to advance the story. I'd rather have waited another few months and see actual progress, than be insulted by this placeholder you threw out. It's like you said 'oh crap, it's been too long, better just put out something that doesn't mean anything and does nothing for the story'. This chapter could have just been added to the previous one. As a reader, it's insulting. I don't mind waiting forever and a day for a new chapter, as long as that chapter is worth the wait.

This chapter was not worth the wait.

And the 'life is a bitch' line is insulting too. Like we don't understand how life is. I'm an adult, I know how hard living a life can be. Don't apologize for it. That insinuates that there's something you could've done about it. And especially don't use it to excuse this lazy piece of writing. I've known authors who've gone a year without writing because life got in the way, and when they finally put out a new chapter, it was worth it.

That being said, I do like how you're setting up your characters. I'd like to say something about the plot, but it hasn't gone anywhere so I can't really comment on it. I'm a bit confused about Fenrir's pack, as I don't remember him having one at the beginning of the story, but I'll go with it.

I'd like to say that my rant wasn't to discourage you from writing, or to hate on you or your writing. I'm simply showing my displeasure at this particular chapter (chapter 14) because of how lazy it was put together, and how little it did for the story. If we're to wait that long for a chapter, I'd at least like the wait to be worth the time.

Well what did he expect?! If Fenrir wanted a meek little sub he should've kept to the wolves of his pack. Pepper comes in small packages, and I've always thought Harry was short tempered... Please write more when you have the chance!

Great story so far! Keep writing, I want to find out what's going to happen to Harry. Poor Remus! Will he go back to the pack to be with Harry? Looking forward to the next chapter!