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for If You Can\'t Shag Your Friends...

by BirdofFire

schedule June 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well heck !? I think I've been missing out on something almost as much as Hermione was?! I had no idea, anything other than Dramione could be so hot!!? Crap!-that was hot! I really enjoyed that! my only critique would be, being more detailed with exactly what they what they were doing to her, and more, precise, add to who exactly was where doing what. There were a few moments that were slightly confusing, not indecipherable, but a bit muddled; so that might make the difference. Cheers!!!;-)
person Diane
schedule December 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what the pizza guy is going to think of the doorway! And the probable screams from upstairs. Hehehehe
person Jade
schedule July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is amazingly written, please keep going with this. I love your sex scenes, you don't hold back but yet you don't over do anything and make it too raunchy. This really brightens up my day thanks a bunch!
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I would love to be the meat in that Weasley sandwich! Fred and George are the best and Fred lives in my version of Deathly Hallows too!
person ChaosLady
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! It was hot!
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't really care for Hermione stories but I love Twins ones so decided I'd read this one and I'm certain glad I did. Great story. Only thing that could have made it better was to hear what the Twins did to Terry Boot! LOL