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August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like it alot keep writing!!!
Please keep Hermione good harry needs her!!!!
The pace is ok i did scim the begining but i will read it all at a later date i promise!!!
I like the whole story so far so keep it up!!!!!
Please keep Hermione good harry needs her!!!!
The pace is ok i did scim the begining but i will read it all at a later date i promise!!!
I like the whole story so far so keep it up!!!!!
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August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Please keep writing. Thank you for posting more than one chapter @ a time.
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August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Neville!!! First he's stuck with them in potions now in DADA??? He just can't catch a break this year. Lucius is awesome professor and I can't wait for the next chapter!
~Pen
~Pen
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August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter but i think I've read that part somewhere before our sounds similar to another story i have read.
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August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Argh! I sooooo dislike Umbridge!!!! More please!!!
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August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
osdhgldashglh I need so much more of this story! unlike some of the other stories I've read on here, this story is straight and to the point! The beginning was long, yes, but I loved it! It built up to where you are now and just GAH! it's so good. I hate that you left us hanging though! Really why did you have to do that! please, please update soon, and let me know when you do! especially cause unlike fanfiction.net (craptastic site btw) this site doesn't allow for notifications on when authors update stories or post new stories.
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August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story this morning and have spent the day reading it. I am impressed, it's an interesting concept, well written with only slight spelling and grammatical errors that don't take away from the story and entirely entertaining and engaging. I can't wait to see what happens next and where it goes. It's a fresh twist to Harry Potter and I find myself eagerly anticipating the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
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August 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ron knows. Oh I soooo need more!
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August 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Dumbledore messed up there!!!
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August 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! The in depth background and build up of the plot was fantastic. Definitely what made this story so much better than others that merely glossed over the history of a story or did flashbacks to make up for actual plot. Your characters are so much fun to read. The way you make sure to distinguish how each character speaks is amazing to read. Thanks for writing and until the next chapter!