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by Riahana

person djaddict
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
\o/ update!!

I hope the potion works!! Don't want Draco losing his marbles!! lol

Enjoying!
schedule August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*grins* I think I see where you're going with Severus...That's good, I hate to see him so alone and hurting. I love the curve you've thrown in with Albus being related to Aubrey, and also, Harry. Wow, that's something else! I can't wait to read more!
person Krucksue
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another cliff hanger....How will Alberforth take being related? This is such a good story. Thank you for writing it. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!!!! Ariana was Audrey's mother? Who is Severus' second mate? Hermione?
schedule August 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ROFL. I had this mental image of Lucius going, "Severus! (imagine a bit of a whine) I have muggle all over me!"
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Tooo wonderful!!!
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor deluded Pansy!
person Jan
schedule August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please update chapter 41 soon.
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Vernon got his just desserts!
schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Can i just say that throughout this story the Harry/Hermione scenes have hit me right in the feels, and you have nailed how strong their bond is. Their relationship is pretty much the same in canon as EVERY time harry is distrusted or abandoned by what seems like the whole world, Hermione always has his back and has never leaves him and trusts him completely. None of his friends in canon(Ron included) have shown that level of devotion to harry and one scene in particular that comes to mind is in the fourth book when everyone thinks harry cheated to enter the tournament to gain more fame and are refusing to speak to him,Hermione actually brings him a small breakfast, takes him for a walk to help clear his head THEN hears his side of the story and doesn't hesitate to believe him.It's my opinion that while Ron may have been his first friend, Hermione is his CLOSEST friend.Love where you have taken this story and love the draco/hermione interaction as well, the growing respect between them is sweet.