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by Riahana

person delia cerrano
schedule July 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Read "the whole story" (haha little play on words there stupid I know) over 3 days. It was great after the 1st chapter or two which was kind of confusing and dry. I am so looking forward to more chapters!! Love reading about the elves getting ready to put Dumbledore in his place once and for all. What a switch up on what I normally read in stories...Voldie is good (or better anyway, and going to work at being better) and Dumbledore will be shown for the manipulating power hungry wizard he is.
person niamh
schedule March 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
is there anyway you could send out email notifications when a new chapter is posted? This story is far too good for me not to keep up with it properly!!
person NekoKoi
schedule March 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!
It's really good!
can't wait for the next chapter ^-^
person love
schedule February 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love this story and everyone in it!! Anxious to read more
person nyks
schedule December 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope you haven't abandoned this fic as I would love to read more of it. I come back again and again waiting for the next chapter... I do hope you'll continue writing this.
person Anon
schedule December 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I should just give up looking to see if you update this every day, right? sigh...
person Maggie
schedule November 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I guess this is abandoned, so sad, loved it :(
person Majest
schedule November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hey i love this story can you please hurry and update. i think you should hurry up and get sereverus and hermione together it is so obvious she is his mate. And I would definitely love for aubrey to get her powers back soon. Just think her with her full heiress powers the malfoy manor would be in a uproar when harry is there and even when he is not. Pure evil and definitely delicious. hahahahahah i love it lol
person Nyouko
schedule October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOVE the story. Can't wait tell the next chapter and when Snape find out who his new mate is. Who is going to find out first Snape or Hermione? Or does Hermione aready now because that would be so cool and that will show alot about her joking with him. When is Ron going to get really really hurt? Even tho I like Ron in the books I still thought he needed to hit by either Hermione or Harry a couple times.
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! And what did dumbles do to that bed? I remember in one story a curse that caused horrific nightmares that should kill you...wonder if it was similar. Stupid old man, I hope you get what is coming to you! Also, I am confused, shouldn't Luna be an elf also? She is Draco's cousin after all. Looking forward to more as always!