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July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sirius has gray eyes. It's definitely, not defiantly in the beginning of the chapter. Defiant is how you behave when you go against someone. Other than that, there are a few your instead of you're and a few other minor things. Sorry, had to get that out. Great chapter though! If you are looking for a beta, I can be of service. :)
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July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait until Ch. 13! Great story!
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July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Will you spoil me like yesterday and give me many chapters in one day? I hope so!!! Poor Harry is confused and Draco being snarky doesn't help. I was hoping he'd try a little harder. *sigh* It's been two days. Sooo can't wait for more!!!
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July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter. It was so funny when Greyback said he wanted Harry to meet his son. Also Sirius was so funny about ready to jump out of his seat and Tom getting annoyed by it. I have to ask as to who is the uke and seme in Sirius's and Remus's relationship because the way you described Sirius it sounded like he was the girly one. I love Narcissa and how she told Draco to apologize to Harry or he wont get any attention from him. Please update soon, can't wait to read the next chapter.
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July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I love the plot and it makes me laugh how Severus and Sirius argue and give Tom a headache with it all. It made me happy that Sirius and Remus are together, it's one of my favorite couples. I can't wait to see how Harry and Draco end up together and if they will have children. I also want to see the plan that Tom and trhe First Warriors came up with to give Harry the leadership. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.
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July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love it
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July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope the sneer was directed at Vernon and not Harry. Soooo need more!!!
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July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i love this it is so different from all the others that i have read please update soon cant wait to see what happens
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July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
New beginning?
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July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love these new chapters. I love how Lucius attacked the Dursley's with a unforgivable and how Sirius was going to kill them with one for putting Harry in the cupboard. I hope Sirius and Remus have a child, it would be so cute. I can't wait for the next chapter to update, so I can read more. Please update soon, just love this story.