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by Riahana

schedule April 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Please continue this story it's so good I wish to see what happens between Harry Draco sev and monie and Tom an arbry .

person Anonymous
schedule July 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

It's a shame that you never continued with this story. Probably one of the better ones out there and certainly a fantastical plot line. Please continue it I come back and reread it every so often in hopes I've added a chapter. 

Thanks SDL

schedule April 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
-=whined loudly=- I just found your story and sat through to read all 59 chapters of it at once. Please keep writing! I'll Beta for you! Really I will!!! I'm in love with your story and writing. Please please pleeeease come back soon!
schedule March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to more chapters. :) It is an easy story to get hooked on.
person Sparky
schedule December 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! Please, please, PLEASE write more soon!
person daithi
schedule November 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story, took a bit to flip things around with Tom being the good guy hehe. I really feel bad for both Tom and Snape knowing that they both lost their mates. But am really loving the elven twist to the story.
person daithi
schedule November 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it's not to often you get a well written Harry/Draco story with the Elven ancestry. I can't believe I'm already caught up to the last chapter. This story stays similiar to the original but differs enough that it is intriguing. I like how Tom is a good guy but still has bad guy issues. I really like the Hermoine/Severus pairing as well does Snape good for someone to deal back to him some of what he gave his students. Hopefully next chter will be up soon.
schedule September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
enjoy so far ^^

~eros
schedule August 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, I was so happy when you updated this that I went back and read the whole story again that is why this review is so late. It made me excited to read it again since its been months that I've been looking for this update and I couldn't believe that you would abandon this story since if you did I would just cry because I just love it so much. I can't believe how cute Hermione and Severus are as a couple and I hope there will be more moments and interactions that leads up to them being together. I also hope they have a child or two because it would be too adorable to see Severus as a daddy. Also I hope there is more interactions and moments between Tom and Aubrey as I can't wait to see how this pairing comes to get together, which I also hope we can see them have a child too as I want to see Tom as a daddy and Aubrey is so awesome as a grandmother and mother, she needs to be one again but with Tom. I also hope Draco and Harry have a child too, since their relationship is so adorable and cute that a child would only make it better. I just love this plot and where it is going that I can't wait for another update. I can't wait also to see which side or if any does Neville and Luna stand, also who Harry has on his side when he goes to defeat Dumbledore. Also can't wait to see what Harry looks like as a Elf and Remus's and Sirius's child when they are born. So Please update soon. Thank you for writing such a great and wonderful story.
person Jan
schedule July 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lol, love this story. Please update chapter 59 soon.