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April 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Is this ever going to be updated?
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April 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really wish you would update...
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April 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue it.
You can make dumbledore get harry the bigest tits there are and a pussy so he can get pregnant and be the best of the whores.
You can make dumbledore get harry the bigest tits there are and a pussy so he can get pregnant and be the best of the whores.
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November 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I thought you had a great intro for this story but then nothing ever happened with it :(
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March 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I found your story and loved it. I hope to see another chapter soon.
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November 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
plz write more
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November 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Like it, update?
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August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see where you go with this.
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July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am impatient to read more! Thank you for posting the story!
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July 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful beginning to a very unique and unusual pairing. I can't wait to read more and see how Harry takes to his submissive place and how Dumbledore acts as master. And shota/chan and mpreg comes together very nicely and makes for a great fic.
You may want to acquire a Beta to help with spelling, grammar, and maintaining plot. Unfortunately, I was unable at the end to figure out exactly who were the other slaves. Maybe you could identify them in the next chapter, both by name and by their master(s), while they train Harry and prepare him for his station in life.
I'll be patiently awaiting the next chapter. :)
You may want to acquire a Beta to help with spelling, grammar, and maintaining plot. Unfortunately, I was unable at the end to figure out exactly who were the other slaves. Maybe you could identify them in the next chapter, both by name and by their master(s), while they train Harry and prepare him for his station in life.
I'll be patiently awaiting the next chapter. :)