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This is very well written and has an excellent plot. I can't wait to read the rest and hope you will update soon.

wRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!

Yes! An update ! :). I was a lil worried there as the latest is chapter 23 but on fanfiction.net is chapter 25. I though i'll be disappointed if it will be a post over of chap 23 on this site. But, yeay! It's after the wedding part. Time to handle the trauma. I can't wait for draco and jason bonding. While harry might received the worst abuse, i am more focused on draco as i love him more. Can't wait for him to be knight in shining armor.
Can't wait for the meeting at the platform :)

P/s: i have this runaway imagination (when i feel vindictive at harry) where harry is jealous over draco when he see how draco ex-husband (kian's father) doted on draco. In my imagination, the exhus and the fiance actually intended for threesom but draco missing their intentation and didn't belive in triad marriage anyway. I would love to see harry bites his nails when he see how well they treated draco( okay, i might be a lil angry when harry accepted clive's proposition and didn't immediately run to draco's side when he received the letter with the teardrops. So i created the scenario just to satisfy my 'fish you' moment to harry)

Hi, I'm brazilian and I need to tell u that ur story is really well written. I read all the chapters today and I'm really expecting an update. Congratulations.

This is a really unique and interesting story.
It has really kept me on my toes mostly.

The only thing I believe you should work on (and maybe go back over your chapters) is mixing up the sons Jamie and Jason. Pleanty of times I find you writing about one child but than somehow it switches to the other childs name. I have to go back up to see if some how the other boy entered the part when in fact they hadn't. Even in the latest chapter you said Jamie storming out of his room when it should have been Jason. Just something I think you might want to relook at.

Other than that I really enjoyed this story and can't wait to read more :D

Oh and I also hope that you'll have harry interact with Jamie more as well as Draco interacting with Jason more.
It seem like the only child between the two that they care for is Kai.
While Kai is important so are Jason and Jamie.
They need time to spend with the father they don't really know or have talked to.

Hopefully you will add those into your future chapters :D

Harry is an idiot but at least he knows how Draco felt when he tried to immasculate him during their marriage, pink *Snort*. But I really love the story and I was wondering if you were planning to continue it? It's really nice though Harry's a douche for pretending not to notice Draco's tear stain on the letter. Hope he comes to his senses! Abusive assholes should rot in jail, Clive is disgusting and it's really obvious he loves the fame that comes with Harry.

I say kick the sods ass, how dare he hit those children!!!

I hope that Harry and Draco get back together!! Look forward to the next update.

Finally finished 22 chapters, and, NOOOO~~PLEASE don

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