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oh,my...wonderfully hot fun

Excellent writing. I greatly enjoyed it. Well done and I hope to read more of your writing soon.

OK so I read 50 shades and it's writing was pretty bad. That being said your story was wonderfully written and your intimate scenes much better than the book which inspired you. If you would like to read a wonderful and erotic set of book please read the books that you find at http://www.jacquelinecarey.com/ they are beautifully written with characters that inspire and arouse and are not just "Mummy Porn" as 50 shades is.

I, for one, have NOT read fifty Shades of Grey based on reviews on Amazon, but I like this story very much . Looking forward to ensuing smut! Mwhahahaha!