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March 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i wonder what our stalker will do next? hmm what kind of message will he send now? why is he trying to break them apart? does he want one of them for them selves?
i love them as a couple and i cant wait to read what happened to them.
im happy to know that you will not give up this story im kind of addicted to it lol do i need my fix
please update again soon
i love them as a couple and i cant wait to read what happened to them.
im happy to know that you will not give up this story im kind of addicted to it lol do i need my fix
please update again soon
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March 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
you have me guessing as to who this person is!!! Draco ? Nott?another Slyerrin well you'll say it soon. harry all mad cause hermione won't tell him what is up with her !!!!!! so good Thanks and see you soon !!!!
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March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i didn't want this story to end! im addicted to this story and need more i love it!!! please add more soon i cant wait to read what will happen next!!!!!!!
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March 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am liking the way this story is beginning. I like to think that if
f JKR had continued the series instead of doing an epilogue, she would write Ron as a complete git.
f JKR had continued the series instead of doing an epilogue, she would write Ron as a complete git.
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March 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
HAVE YOU ABONDED THIS PLEASE DON'T SAY IT NEED UPDATES SO GOOD !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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February 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
More!! Keep writing please! Enjoying the build-up to what I'm sure will be a passionate coming together finally.
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December 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG so good !!!!!! MORE !!!!!!
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February 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
More! Need more!
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February 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love the moniker "The Great Bat and his Princess"!! So fitting for Snape & Hermione! ;) Can't even begin to fathom how they are going to make it through the year without being discovered alone together, however. I have a feeling McGonagall will dismiss him first and ask questions later if she even glimpses anything that is remotely inappropriate (as she rightly should).
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February 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You have a good base to write a great fanfic. But your story line is all over the place. One min his flirting the next insulting. One minute she's flirting then she's crying. It kinda takes a toll on the story. Get a beta and this will help to make your story so much more awesome. Keep up the good work! This is great for your first fanfic.