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by ssdawn

person starr
schedule June 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG it can't be Ron ( not another story that he's a git ) Thanks for the update and hope to see more soon :):):)):):)
schedule June 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am glad they got to her on time and I hope she heals quickly. I am sorry Severus is so sad and worried, and Harry and Ginny, as well. But, WTF is up with Ron?! Who hexed or imperiused him?! I hope that person is found and beaten to death for making him like this!! Thanks! HG4eva
person starr
schedule June 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG at least they got to her in time...man is Ron going to be an ass in this one too !!!!!!! poor Hermone and Snape pls. let her be well !!!Thanks for the update !!!! and see you soon :):):)
person Trelweny
schedule June 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ron sees Hermione broken, bleeding, and nearly DYING and he focuses on Severus' loving her and being kept in the dark of it? Huff. Some friend. If he's going to treat anyone that way they're better off without him.

I'm so glad they found her! Hopefully in time... but you wouldn't do that to us or them, would you?

Thanks for writing.
schedule May 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed this chapter particularly. Keep writing please, I'm dying to know who is causing havoc for them now... Why is Ron being such an ass??
person starr
schedule May 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG your evil !!!!!!!!!!!!!! shit and Harry to busy with Ginny .....yea has to be either 2 upper classmen or 2 adult, can't quest yet love it !!!!! Thanks and more soon !!!!!
person kitty5tatts
schedule April 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Three chapters in an I'm stuck. Won't be able to read another till I'm caught up with however far you've gotten! Very well written, thank you
person starr
schedule April 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
so it's not just one person it's two and it's all for Snape !!!!!! Mmm teachers or 7th years ?????really good I'll be waiting for more !!!!! :):):)
person nari-chan
schedule April 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
another wonderful chapter and i cant wait to read more of this wonderful story!
maybe Lucius is wanting Severus for him self? if not draco then who? and what is there reasoning?
do they want revenge? do they want the dark haired man for them selves? what is motivating these attacks and threats?
please update again soon i cant wait to see what is to come next !
schedule March 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Can I just put a bow on this and keep it at home lol