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for Living

by ssdawn

person lovey_reader
schedule February 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Shut the front door! Didn't see that one coming. That was brilliant. Theo and Justin...hmmmm. I love the witty and sarcastic remarks that everyone makes. It's so funny. I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule December 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, interesting. And, I LOVE that Ron was the one to notice. :-) Thanks! HG4eva
person Victoria
schedule December 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good story with plenty of suspense. Not clear to me why they wouldn't use the Marauders' Map to trace where people are in the castle. For example, when Hermione was missing, they could have found her on the map. Oh, well, maybe in this story the map was lost or destroyed?
person IkbenVanEyck
schedule September 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this fanfic, thanks!!! So fun and intriguing, love their chemistry and stubbornness, and the tension buiding ... Finishing chapter 6 and I'm eager to know what's next...
person starr
schedule August 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
so happy hermione is ok but you put Ron as a spy your kidding !!!!!!! he can't do that to dumb !!!!!!!! and everything in between !!!!! Thanks for the update and update soon to see them in action !!!!!!
person Dianne
schedule August 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really like what you've written so far. The not perfect rating is only because it is not yet complete.
schedule July 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very good fic, please continue.
person starr
schedule July 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
ok why would you say that about Ron now the only thing I will be thinking of if Ron is good or if he the one doing all of this !!!!!!!!!!!!! man can't wait for more now that they are all going to fight back yes !!!!!! Thanks for the update !!!!
schedule July 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness this story is awesome. I've read the whole thing in one sitting!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
schedule June 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update! I think Ron is somehow affected with (I'm making this up, but it sounds good lol) Horcrux Disease. He needs help and quickly, before he does something he will regret later and that will cause far too much pain. I also think Severus and Hermione are going to tell one another they're in love with each other. :-) I loved that Harry stood up to him and got Severus to man up. Thanks again! HG4eva