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I actually like that last scene with Marc as it keeps him in character for someone who is selfish and thinks of himself first. I had pictured him as a future abuser so this certainly fits.

It is Draco's reaction which I am waiting to see. Keep up the good work.

I saw your response to a previous review, and I'm not going to rant or anything but I agree with you~
A story and relationship takes time to develop. When it's rushed then the reader doesn't get the chance to experience what each character felt and went through to make a bond with each other. Nooot to mention I just like long stories anyway~ I'm glad you posted the story on here to be free of ff.net's restrictions. But I know for sure that readers here will probably be a little more harsh here than the readers on ff.net. It's an adult website and they're itching for some 'adultness'. ... I think that patience is adult but that's just me I guess~
Anywho~ I really like this story.. and if I were to have any problems with it, it's definitely what Draco did. I know it's necessary for the story but I'm so nervous thinking of what Harry will say and how he'll react when he finds out. That's a huge rift in trust for sure. I'm tempted to just go read it all on ff.net like I did with 'Will you be my daddy?', a great story by the way <3.

Thank you so much for your work, it's really entertaining~
And just putting a thought out there ..HP & DM creature fic... really good ones are hard to come by lately. Buuut if you decide to start on a new story down the line...*hint hint* :3

I have to say that when I first read your stories I thought you had potential and was looking forward to more from you. However I've realised that you've become repetitive. Draco has an all consuming love for Harry. Harry feels nothing for Draco. Draco somehow or rather does something stupid or arrogant. It's come to a point where I already know where it's going next. It was really obvious that Harry wasn't going to up and break up with Marc straight away even when Marc practically forced himself on Harry.I wasn't going to say anything till I saw the previous readers comment and have to agree. I hope you broaden your storyline where it isn't the same thing over and over. Don't get angry but do try to get better as a writer. I'm sure you yourself notice the trend your setting for yourself.

Interesting story, though I hope that Harry breaks up with Marc before he fines out he is with child...

Please update chapter 4 soon ^_^

Morning sickness has already started! Oh Draco! You are in sooo much trouble!!! Harry don't let Marc talk you into going to Greece. You go with Draco and Narcissa! Oh I'm worried. What will Harry do? Will he forgive Draco? Did Marc cheat at this party? he's too perfect!!!

haiz you always do Draco chasing Harry. I wish you do it another way around. It's really tiring and it shows that you don't have much plot with most of your stories. I wonder if maybe you just hate Draco. But just because you like Harry like that doesnt mean Draco has to always chase him, don't you get bored writing that. Everytime you come up with a new story, I already know what it's going to be like. If you want to better yourself as a writer please expand your plotline.

Hi! I already started reading this fic on fanfiction and really like it. When are you going to update or are you just going to start posting them all here?

draco you stupid man more please!

Uh oh!!! Draco you are going to be in some major trouble!!! Will Harry forgive him?