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I liked it Good job l

sequel please....?!?! i like the truth and want to know what happens between Harry, Caelyn, && Draco

I really hope that you'll do a sequel to this, cause it just doesn't seem complete with Draco obliviating Harry. And if so, I hope it will be on a happier note.

Part of me feels sorry for Draco, but then again I don't. I feel worse for Harry. This is was good ending for "the truth". Great work :)

Good ending, although I think Harry should have sent the letters to Draco. But I do understand why he didn't. I imagine that eventually come to an understanding, and work their up to being together again. Caelyn gets upset, naturally, but as she gets older she understand why things happened the way they did. This was a great story :) I'm so glad you got rid of that Marc creep. I didn't like him.

This epilogue was good :) I liked that they did get married and had another child. Good work as always!

I think this ending is my favorite. That was both sweet and hot at the same time :) Great story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, you are very talented. Look forward to your future works!

Crazy about the story & wanted Draco to tell Harry the truth. But what Harry did in that one was worse than what Draco did. Harry hurt himself, Draco, & the child! 11 yrs?? The child grows up with no father, Harry lies to her, keeps Draco from his own child & from himself that Draco loves more than anything & always has. How is that good or honest? He was worse than Draco!! Separating while Harry thought it all out ..fine. But to not let Draco be there for the birth, 1st steps, 1st words etc? Especially knowing all the time that they still loved each other & that Draco loved the child! Sorry but Harry is a hypocrite & very cruel! 11 yrs!!! That's beyond losing trust in someone. I'm surprised that Draco still wants him after all that overkill...think of why he did it in the 1st place...he loved Harry & was afraid Harry wouldn't love him. They were both very young & Draco had bad fathering which led him to be uncertain & concerned with what he wanted yet was deep down a great & loving person. What happened to 2nd chances? Harry was willing enough to give Marc one?

While the epilogue for the lie was the best ending for Draco and for their daughter who grew up with a father, I think the lie would eventually be too much for Draco to keep.

While I like the truth epilogue better, I thought it really sad that their daughter grew up without a father. When she finds out, and she seems too intelligent not to figure it out, she would feel betrayed by being lied to her entire life.

Why do I think in the final ending that Draco managed to obliviate his entire memory including Harry. *laughs evily*

Nicely done.

Stupid Draco!! How can you continue to lie like that?