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August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Every time I read a new chapter my mind keeps going "But it is all going to change! Lily is going to muddle it all up and James is going to be an ass to Sirius and Peter will betray them all" But god, isn't it good to see the happiness displayed before the oncoming storm.
Thank you again for updating ^_^
Thank you again for updating ^_^
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August 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, Remus makes me so happy lol. Definitely solemn but well needed plot. Your imagining of Sirius' childhood makes it so believable. You were able to take the few glimpses from the stories of the Marauders life and make it into something tangible. Thank you and Well done!
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August 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You write complicated situations so well. I love it and hate it at the same time. Love it because of the angsty it all turned out and how sucked in I became in the story and hate it because of what was done to Sirius. The little thing is so confused and the only member of the family he truly loves and cares for (well besides Regulus) just up and went and did something unforgivable. Can I hug him?
Thank you again so much for this story ^_^
Thank you again so much for this story ^_^
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August 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You did amazingly!! I am astonished of how strong willed Sirius became in that instant. Very well done, you are like a machine cranking out these chapters! thank you so much. You made this sick female feel better before bed ^_^
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August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
In response to your response, no worries, I understand. I
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August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The boys will always be boys huh?
Remus is always such the little cutie, I swear. Poor Peter, soon all this animosity will bring him to do the ultimate betrayal and poorer Sirius will have to face the facts that everyone will think it is because of him.
It is interesting to see how well you wright and imagine what the Marauders lives were when they were younger. Because you are sticking with the timeline of HP right? Or will you be doing something of a slight AU with this one? Either way I am truly enjoying it.
Remus is always such the little cutie, I swear. Poor Peter, soon all this animosity will bring him to do the ultimate betrayal and poorer Sirius will have to face the facts that everyone will think it is because of him.
It is interesting to see how well you wright and imagine what the Marauders lives were when they were younger. Because you are sticking with the timeline of HP right? Or will you be doing something of a slight AU with this one? Either way I am truly enjoying it.
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August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm half-surprised this story doesn't have any reviews, especially considering the hit count. But I'm only half-surprised, because I know that sadly people just don't review that much on AFF. So don't feel bad; it's nothing to do with the story. Which, by the way, is very cute.
To be absolutely, one hundred percent honest, there are definitely some grammatical issues which do give me pause. That being said, I like pretty much everything else about it. It's difficult to sit through a story on adult fanfiction that doesn't yet have any adult content, but you have me attached enough to the characters that I'll wait uncharacteristically patiently. For starting out so early in life, the pace is pleasantly quick. The content is believable and nicely complex, and incredibly adorable in some parts. It's not one of my favourite pairings to read, as I'm always worried they're going to stay cannon and therefore not be able to get a happily ever after, at least without adultery. But you have me very attached to it, here. The way you write him, Sirius in particular is very enjoyable to read about. This is a very unusual case where I'm actually hoping you defiant from cannon. No offence to Lily, but you have me very attached to your boys. I was hoping for the Remus/werewolf thing to come up, so I'm glad to see it is. I'm also hoping for Sirius to tell his friends the truth. Both so he gets their support and they get the insight. I feel really bad for him. It is difficult breaking away from something you've been told your whole life, and you do an excellent job of making it come realistically slowly to Sirius while keeping him likeable and accepting. James is really no better than Slytherins, if he's discriminating like that. But then, that's true to the books, so again you're doing a great job of handling a truthfully difficult subject.
Overall I'm definitely enjoying this story, and will certainly stick around for the ride. I'm sorry more people haven't given you reviews; you deserve much more.
To be absolutely, one hundred percent honest, there are definitely some grammatical issues which do give me pause. That being said, I like pretty much everything else about it. It's difficult to sit through a story on adult fanfiction that doesn't yet have any adult content, but you have me attached enough to the characters that I'll wait uncharacteristically patiently. For starting out so early in life, the pace is pleasantly quick. The content is believable and nicely complex, and incredibly adorable in some parts. It's not one of my favourite pairings to read, as I'm always worried they're going to stay cannon and therefore not be able to get a happily ever after, at least without adultery. But you have me very attached to it, here. The way you write him, Sirius in particular is very enjoyable to read about. This is a very unusual case where I'm actually hoping you defiant from cannon. No offence to Lily, but you have me very attached to your boys. I was hoping for the Remus/werewolf thing to come up, so I'm glad to see it is. I'm also hoping for Sirius to tell his friends the truth. Both so he gets their support and they get the insight. I feel really bad for him. It is difficult breaking away from something you've been told your whole life, and you do an excellent job of making it come realistically slowly to Sirius while keeping him likeable and accepting. James is really no better than Slytherins, if he's discriminating like that. But then, that's true to the books, so again you're doing a great job of handling a truthfully difficult subject.
Overall I'm definitely enjoying this story, and will certainly stick around for the ride. I'm sorry more people haven't given you reviews; you deserve much more.
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August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hello there, I am a deep lover of your works.the tension and angst that is loaded into every detail make it somewhat heart wrenching to read but sometimes there are "happy endings" with your stories. Thank you for continuing this one! Also, I know the torture of Sirius is supposed to happen in this one but, can he have a happy ending? At least until James has to marry Lilly and all that jazz. I just want him happy lol
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August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awe! That was so sweet and surprisingly fluffy! I had enjoyed it immensly. I liked the subtle and growing bond between the boys, Peter's growing animosity, and Remus' adorable little self. You are wonderful for updating this quick. I am looking forward to more updates (and maybe more stories, yea?).