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November 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Thanks for continuing to share this story, and for updating. :) Know that it is appreciated! So excited to see Harry beginning to trust Draco and Blaise, and I'm eager to see where Harry's potential political future goes. It's a unique but not implausible take on a non-Auror career for him and I REALLY like it. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter I'm hoping Harry comes clean soon or else this could end horribly.
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November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't think that anything good is going to come from Harry's letter, or his tricking the house elves. I wonder what Draco is up to.
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November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
first, don't apologize for taking as long as you need. regular up dates would be nice, but as my sensie used to say, 'it takes as long as it takes.' I personally would prefer you to take long and write a good chappie than be fast and crappy.
moving on. yeah, that was a lot of science dumped in your answer but it made sense. kudos considering it was two in the morning. (the m preg that made the most sense to me was called 'how do you like it.' and suggested that oral sex was the way to get preg... anal sex was purely recreational. its a good and rather amusing read as it's far more logical.) yay for magic as an explain everything plot device. ^^ besides, this is technically a creature fic, normal rules need not apply. some how birds manage to have everything come out the same hole, wee, poo and eggs... go figure. :/
wow, your family life has been rather un fun. i hope it's improved since that review. if not hang in there, i'll add you to the prayer list. i hope your dog is okay. i know with rats when you feel a lump it's time to pick out a little ratty grave plot. i'm hoping dogs are more resistant.
now on to the actual chappie er chappies since i don't seem to have reviewed the last two. :/
i don't blame har for being apprehensive. the one and only time he's popped his wings previous everything hurt. if his transformation wasn't so traumatic it probably wouldn't be so much of prob. har is just NO to everything right now though he's doing his best to give them a chance.
blaise is rather rushing things a bit.
can't say i blame draco for not wanting to be emotionally stripped naked in front of har. har wouldn't mock him or anything and would probably welcome it as it would give him some clue as to how the other two think... which he needs right now.
yup, to much, to close, to soon for draco right now. while har might enjoy or even revel in it, draco has spent far to much of his life in control of himself and projecting that control to be comfortable with such intimacy.
i think blaise just wants this to work soooooooooooo much that he rushed it a bit.
oopsie. just read the blurb above this chappie... guess i did review after all? ah well, i can see how close this review matches that one. :P
*blinks. wow, that's like the complete opposite of draco's reaction. its not really surprising given har's sucky childhood that he'd relish affection and closeness. har works so very differently from the two slyths... he needs openness and connection to trust. though it might also be a sub thing. i think draco will need to get used to being more open with him. har doesn't trust them... yet. not when they still hide so much.
sigh, oh well done draco, you've managed to push har a step back... of course, har's own insecurities are helping with that one too. good thing blaise is there as a balance/mediator.
har just has to much guts to back off from this. very much a 'lets do it and get it done' attitude.
well, har knows he can do this now. he's not the type to shrink away and those two slyths better remember that.
eheh, no one as independent as har likes being seen weakened and humiliated, even if the slyths don't think of it like that.
oh... changeable wings! what an incredibly sensible idea. are they able to do it mid flight... that would be a masterful way to adapt to changing air conditions.
will we get a chappie where har gets to ruminate on some of these points he's tucking away for further consideration?
the technical stuff is necessary i suppose but if i was up there like har, even if i tried to listen carefully, it's still pretty much all 'quack' to me. (ie may as well be speaking duck). i do much better with pictures and illustrations. i think har is more of watch and do type.
i think that little comment took draco aback... but some how put him at his ease as well. i look forward to when har knows enough for them to compete.
i imagine learning to fly is a bit like learning to drive... except with a higher possibiltiy of crashing. good thing har has those two slyths on hand. still, it's be complicated needing to keep track of dozens of things where driving only requires five or six, until it gets to the point where you do most of it automatically. ... i still forget to look in my rearview as much as is should. >>
a couple of typos... most of them i could figure out but this ones got me puzzled. 'and mafficked and flapped stronger.'
haaa, maybe blaise needs to explain them rules.
i think seeking har do a dive would be epic. needs to build his strength before that though.
hmmm, har doesn't mind emotional bond and intimacy but isn't yet comfy with the physical? i think draco is the other way round. he'd happily get his hands on har's body if he even gave a hint but he's not ready for the emotional.
well, at the time har sent it it made sense... he was being held agaisnt his will... eheh. oopsie.
*blinks... is this future plot point i'm seeing here? har the point and focus, the honest one, with blaise and draco at his back doing the finagling? they'll have hard time trying to swing that. it could easily be seen as two dubious types hooking up with the straight arrow in order to take advantage of both him and his rep... not to mention what might happen if some bugger got a hold of the whole sub mate thing. the malfoy name still carries weight though. and how would har get his changes to stick? restructuring an entire society is no easy task, especially as there will be resistance by the score. a life times fight if ever there was. I can't blame har though, i think, considering how tilted and biased the WW is, most mb's and muggle raised half bloods would just go back to the slightly fairer muggle world.
har has quite a bit of emotional jumble to sort through. i wonder if the slyths will get to give him that massage or not. :P
moving on. yeah, that was a lot of science dumped in your answer but it made sense. kudos considering it was two in the morning. (the m preg that made the most sense to me was called 'how do you like it.' and suggested that oral sex was the way to get preg... anal sex was purely recreational. its a good and rather amusing read as it's far more logical.) yay for magic as an explain everything plot device. ^^ besides, this is technically a creature fic, normal rules need not apply. some how birds manage to have everything come out the same hole, wee, poo and eggs... go figure. :/
wow, your family life has been rather un fun. i hope it's improved since that review. if not hang in there, i'll add you to the prayer list. i hope your dog is okay. i know with rats when you feel a lump it's time to pick out a little ratty grave plot. i'm hoping dogs are more resistant.
now on to the actual chappie er chappies since i don't seem to have reviewed the last two. :/
i don't blame har for being apprehensive. the one and only time he's popped his wings previous everything hurt. if his transformation wasn't so traumatic it probably wouldn't be so much of prob. har is just NO to everything right now though he's doing his best to give them a chance.
blaise is rather rushing things a bit.
can't say i blame draco for not wanting to be emotionally stripped naked in front of har. har wouldn't mock him or anything and would probably welcome it as it would give him some clue as to how the other two think... which he needs right now.
yup, to much, to close, to soon for draco right now. while har might enjoy or even revel in it, draco has spent far to much of his life in control of himself and projecting that control to be comfortable with such intimacy.
i think blaise just wants this to work soooooooooooo much that he rushed it a bit.
oopsie. just read the blurb above this chappie... guess i did review after all? ah well, i can see how close this review matches that one. :P
*blinks. wow, that's like the complete opposite of draco's reaction. its not really surprising given har's sucky childhood that he'd relish affection and closeness. har works so very differently from the two slyths... he needs openness and connection to trust. though it might also be a sub thing. i think draco will need to get used to being more open with him. har doesn't trust them... yet. not when they still hide so much.
sigh, oh well done draco, you've managed to push har a step back... of course, har's own insecurities are helping with that one too. good thing blaise is there as a balance/mediator.
har just has to much guts to back off from this. very much a 'lets do it and get it done' attitude.
well, har knows he can do this now. he's not the type to shrink away and those two slyths better remember that.
eheh, no one as independent as har likes being seen weakened and humiliated, even if the slyths don't think of it like that.
oh... changeable wings! what an incredibly sensible idea. are they able to do it mid flight... that would be a masterful way to adapt to changing air conditions.
will we get a chappie where har gets to ruminate on some of these points he's tucking away for further consideration?
the technical stuff is necessary i suppose but if i was up there like har, even if i tried to listen carefully, it's still pretty much all 'quack' to me. (ie may as well be speaking duck). i do much better with pictures and illustrations. i think har is more of watch and do type.
i think that little comment took draco aback... but some how put him at his ease as well. i look forward to when har knows enough for them to compete.
i imagine learning to fly is a bit like learning to drive... except with a higher possibiltiy of crashing. good thing har has those two slyths on hand. still, it's be complicated needing to keep track of dozens of things where driving only requires five or six, until it gets to the point where you do most of it automatically. ... i still forget to look in my rearview as much as is should. >>
a couple of typos... most of them i could figure out but this ones got me puzzled. 'and mafficked and flapped stronger.'
haaa, maybe blaise needs to explain them rules.
i think seeking har do a dive would be epic. needs to build his strength before that though.
hmmm, har doesn't mind emotional bond and intimacy but isn't yet comfy with the physical? i think draco is the other way round. he'd happily get his hands on har's body if he even gave a hint but he's not ready for the emotional.
well, at the time har sent it it made sense... he was being held agaisnt his will... eheh. oopsie.
*blinks... is this future plot point i'm seeing here? har the point and focus, the honest one, with blaise and draco at his back doing the finagling? they'll have hard time trying to swing that. it could easily be seen as two dubious types hooking up with the straight arrow in order to take advantage of both him and his rep... not to mention what might happen if some bugger got a hold of the whole sub mate thing. the malfoy name still carries weight though. and how would har get his changes to stick? restructuring an entire society is no easy task, especially as there will be resistance by the score. a life times fight if ever there was. I can't blame har though, i think, considering how tilted and biased the WW is, most mb's and muggle raised half bloods would just go back to the slightly fairer muggle world.
har has quite a bit of emotional jumble to sort through. i wonder if the slyths will get to give him that massage or not. :P
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November 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
@14 I really like this story. Please update soon
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October 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
tsk, i really do hope they both go and talk with that portrait. Rushing things rarely ends well. Hopefully, har is over the remembered pain block now and i bet they would have found him magnificent on those gorgeous emerald wings.
Bummer! stupid RL. Still, you got to do what you gotta do. just don't forget about us neh, when all is said and done?
Bummer! stupid RL. Still, you got to do what you gotta do. just don't forget about us neh, when all is said and done?
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October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm Sorry for my phrasing for this review or my english generally...
My Thesis is in working process, too, so i can understand.
But your story is at this time one of my favourites so I can't wait for a new chapter... even if I need to wait!
My Thesis is in working process, too, so i can understand.
But your story is at this time one of my favourites so I can't wait for a new chapter... even if I need to wait!
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October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter and good luck with your studies
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October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing and i cant wait until the next chapter.
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September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Great job! Enjoyed the scene with Ives - would love to see more of that.
Can't wait to see what happens next :)
Can't wait to see what happens next :)