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February 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
and if you don't keep writing I'll castrate you.
This is one of the best stories I have read in a very long and (and so well written to boot!)
This is one of the best stories I have read in a very long and (and so well written to boot!)
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January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was reading and reviewing this story on ffn but have decided to read it on this site from now on (I'm blackroses77 on ffn)
Anyway this was a really good chapter and I am thrilled that Harry will have a way to resist the dominants as I can't see him failing to learn that skill as he so easily throws off the imperious. Once he learns that skill he will be able to choose Draco and Blaize of his own free will so that they can have a healthy relationship since I can't see Harry ever being truly happy or accepting of his relationship with Draco and Blaize if he is forced to accept them in order to save himself from the other dominants, I think a part of him would always resent them and his inheritance. Does Ives have the ability to resist dominants? I never thought about the fact that Hedwig could be intercepted and lead others to their villa, I was only thinking about how Draco and Blaize wouldn't like Ron and Hermione being able to influence Harry against them or come up with a plan to rescue him since that would put Harry in a lot of danger. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Anyway this was a really good chapter and I am thrilled that Harry will have a way to resist the dominants as I can't see him failing to learn that skill as he so easily throws off the imperious. Once he learns that skill he will be able to choose Draco and Blaize of his own free will so that they can have a healthy relationship since I can't see Harry ever being truly happy or accepting of his relationship with Draco and Blaize if he is forced to accept them in order to save himself from the other dominants, I think a part of him would always resent them and his inheritance. Does Ives have the ability to resist dominants? I never thought about the fact that Hedwig could be intercepted and lead others to their villa, I was only thinking about how Draco and Blaize wouldn't like Ron and Hermione being able to influence Harry against them or come up with a plan to rescue him since that would put Harry in a lot of danger. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
rushing, rushing, rushing. oh blaise, haste makes waste and har wasn't ready for even half of that. neither was draco tho i bet he'd be horrified to hear how his reaction has put har off. you really need to tap into some of that slyth cunning and patience.
har doesn't trust either of them yet for all he's agreed to stay and learn. they need to work on THAT first.
this chappie is going to have a lot of fall out i can see. most of it not good.
har doesn't trust either of them yet for all he's agreed to stay and learn. they need to work on THAT first.
this chappie is going to have a lot of fall out i can see. most of it not good.
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January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
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January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Only just started reading this story but have to say I love the idea, it is just different and creative enough to make it really interesting but familiar enough to be a comfortable read. I am a fan of the steady pace you are taking with this story (even as teasing and some what frustrating as it can be to read). You are doing a really good job of letting us have time to understand things from all of their perspectives as well as letting us into Blaise and Draco's relationship with each other. Looking forward to getting to read more. :)
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January 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like how you portray Harry in you story. I can't wait to read more. :)
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January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'll admit to having skipped forward in the story; if it's not complete, I choose to skip around for the 'good' parts. I landed somewhere in the middle of this one, and I'm tempted to go back and start from the beginning. I like where the story is going, and I'm interested to see how it all turns out.
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December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love the fic, can't wait to see more.
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December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm, those were some home truths that draco didn't seem ready to hear. still, at least he knows what sort of base he has to work from now.
i wonder why that temp bond was so strong. was it because that pair helped guide him through his transformation? Are they just especially compatible or is there something else in play.
i'll say it once again. while i very much enjoy reading your fic, RL has priority. Also, i think it's up to the author to pace their stories, unless they've asked for prompts, help, direction guidance from their reviewers. it just hope the re meeting of the golden trio doesn't undo all the good work that ives and the doms have managed to date.
i wonder why that temp bond was so strong. was it because that pair helped guide him through his transformation? Are they just especially compatible or is there something else in play.
i'll say it once again. while i very much enjoy reading your fic, RL has priority. Also, i think it's up to the author to pace their stories, unless they've asked for prompts, help, direction guidance from their reviewers. it just hope the re meeting of the golden trio doesn't undo all the good work that ives and the doms have managed to date.
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December 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back and Best of wishes to you and your family.
The talk between Adler and Draco was absolutely perfect. Draco needed to hear the things that were said and realize that even if Harry has forgiven him, the same does not apply to the rest of the Malfoy family as they have done far too much to gain that. This chapter went a long way to further developing Draco's character and making him more likeable, to me at least. I can't wait for the inevitable reunion of the Golden Trio and how they will react to Draco and Blaise and if they can bury the hatchet.
The talk between Adler and Draco was absolutely perfect. Draco needed to hear the things that were said and realize that even if Harry has forgiven him, the same does not apply to the rest of the Malfoy family as they have done far too much to gain that. This chapter went a long way to further developing Draco's character and making him more likeable, to me at least. I can't wait for the inevitable reunion of the Golden Trio and how they will react to Draco and Blaise and if they can bury the hatchet.