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July 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yea for updates! Glad to see more of this story. Well, it sucks that Hermione wasn't fast enough to escape, but hopefully Blaise and Draco will help 'save the day', as it were. Highly amused by Harry knocking Draco's socks off with that kiss, and Blaise interrupting because he was jealous. [snickers] The black liquid was... a spying potion? But why, is what I'm wondering. Happy writings, and hope RL remains respectful to your writing time! ^__~v
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July 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The snakes tried to warn them, but the lions just couldn't listen to them could they?
Please update chapter 23 soon.
Please update chapter 23 soon.
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July 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This fic is completely astounding! Your writing really made it a great read and the pace of the story I thought was just about perfect! I loved it where you made the fluent transition of emotions, turning still-present rivalry to budding interest spurred by both instincts and appreciation for Harry's personality. I have to admit that I was disgusted by Harry's actions and outward expression of his emotions in the last 2 books of the series, where I felt that he was just an ignorant, so full-of-himself brat that was hungry for public attention while making himself look pathetic and forced-into-action, not to mention all the deaths at the end of the final battle. But I simply loved the Harry in this fic, it really brings back the sweet Harry that was seen in the first few books, still impulsive at times, while achieving maturity that he was supposed to have achieved by the end of the original series. Not to mention the wonderful display of all the character's emotions as they dealt with their emotions ;) although until now, I have still failed to pronounce their creature inheritance... Talking about that, could you include what the Italian (or were some French?) meant in A/N or somewhere else, so that we can know what they are thinking or saying? Harry may be happier not knowing what they called him, or thought of him, but I'm really curious...
I love it when Draco and Blaise keep on teasing Harry, he was just SOOO cute, not to mention that the reactions and thoughts the other two had were equally interesting to read. Please do let them continue teasing him, this is going to be so fun! The last chapter I presume is a great indicator to the change in relationship and tension between the three of them? Since Harry became more concerned over their rep and feelings than being kissed against his will by a certain Blaise Zabini... Draco you can't lose out, make your move soon! Of course when the two of you get to share Harry it'll be the best, but it's too early for now isn't it? Though I thought that the article incident may well be a booster to their trust and relationship, will it? *puppy eyes overflowing with anticipation* I keep remembering when Hermoine forced Rita to write an article for them back in Book 5, could they do the same to Crane? Please update soon XD
I love it when Draco and Blaise keep on teasing Harry, he was just SOOO cute, not to mention that the reactions and thoughts the other two had were equally interesting to read. Please do let them continue teasing him, this is going to be so fun! The last chapter I presume is a great indicator to the change in relationship and tension between the three of them? Since Harry became more concerned over their rep and feelings than being kissed against his will by a certain Blaise Zabini... Draco you can't lose out, make your move soon! Of course when the two of you get to share Harry it'll be the best, but it's too early for now isn't it? Though I thought that the article incident may well be a booster to their trust and relationship, will it? *puppy eyes overflowing with anticipation* I keep remembering when Hermoine forced Rita to write an article for them back in Book 5, could they do the same to Crane? Please update soon XD
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July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Please, PlEaSe, PLEASE upload the next chapter! I love your story and am totally addicted. Thanks for posting it and thanks for reading my review! Have an awesome day! :)
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June 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow, i missed lots. unfortunately my lap top had an accident involving falling and hard wooden floors. >.>
Luc, cissa, amy, you complete and utter bastards... even if they did try and force mate him. i don't think it would help. i think har would suicide before he let himself live like that again.
its fortunate he means more to blaise and draco than that. things are going to get so much more awkward from here on out, as if this courtship wasn't already super awkward. still, har and his prospective mates have the rest of the golden trio at their back now, so that should help.
Luc, cissa, amy, you complete and utter bastards... even if they did try and force mate him. i don't think it would help. i think har would suicide before he let himself live like that again.
its fortunate he means more to blaise and draco than that. things are going to get so much more awkward from here on out, as if this courtship wasn't already super awkward. still, har and his prospective mates have the rest of the golden trio at their back now, so that should help.
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May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy,
"Then, to Harry's dismay, his friend cocked her head, sending the long locks of nut brown hair flying, before she said "I especially liked the part where she said how purebloods were trampling over the rights of everyone else... or was that the Mediwizard?"
A snarky smile worthy of a Slytherin curled her lips as a bark of laughter bubbled out of Ron. She was teasing, Harry knew that, but she was also and more importantly testing the men who held the future of one of her best friends in their clawed hands.
hehe Love it when Hermione's inner lioness decides to bare its fangs.
Hot damn there was sooo much sass going around in this chapter lol.
"Where's the honour in that?"
"Where's the honour in losing?" Draco asked back.
"Of course a Slytherin would say something like that."
"Guys!" Harry called out in helpless exasperation. "Could you please just try to get along? Or pretend to?"
I can just imagine Harry's "oh for fucks sakes you guys" face while this is happening.
I may have already mentioned it in a previous review but what I enjoy most about your story is how you manage to keep everyone in character while giving them some good development and how everyone is on par with everyone else. Allow me to explain, A LOT of "any slythern"/Harry pairing fics have the very bad habit of portraying Slytherins as the top dogs physically and intellectually and having them be jerk sues who rarely ever get whats coming to them and everyone else is given the "Ron the death eater" treatment(for further info on that go to http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/RonTheDeathEater). Was sets your story apart is how you give the Slytherin's flaws that Harry calls them out on and doesn't just forgive them because they look deeply into his eyes all smoldering like or some shit. Here you have Hermione going toe to toe with some politically savy silver tonged devils and managing to score some hits, hell even Ron manages to trump them now and again.
On another note Harry must be feeling really jipped by Narcissa right now. He is the sole reason she is not facing a trial right now and she turns and around and is making plans to screw him over. And I understand that Harry has a massive case of chronic hero syndrome and fully believes in Dumbledore's whole "everyone deserves a second chance" philosophy but good god.... the elder Malfoys have had Several chances to change who they are and keep making the same mistakes. Speaking of which I may have asked this before ........but did Lucius ever serve his full sentence from the first time he was arrested and exposed as a WILLING death eater and liar after the battle in the department of mysteries? You would think that after that a trial wouldn't even be happening and he would be sent right back to Azkaban with even more years added to his time. You would think that a guy with such a strong sense of justice would be a little more vexed that a man who once tried to kill him and his friends just might slip through the cracks. I just hope his feelings towards Draco and Blaise aren't influencing slight double standard.
It sucks seeing Draco so torn about it and we as the readers can see that he owes his parents jack shit. Ya really get the sense that Draco would have been a vastly different and better person had his parents given up the whole pure blood supremacy crap. I mean I don't even want to begin to imagine what school life will be like for him now that Slytherin does not have the same clout they did before the war and after a year in a death eater controlled school where Slytherins were probably the top of the food chain ya just know they will have to be watching there backs, especially Pansy. That haughty attitude of hers is gonna rub people the wrong way and there were quite a few witnesses to her attempt to sell out Harry lol.
Seeing as how Harry's friends have to go into hiding for the time being will Miss Crane perhaps have to go into hiding as well? Her ass probably has many people targeting it and it would be the perfect chance for her to see that Draco and Blaise aren't abusing Harry and it may reveal any ulterior motives she may have against pure bloods. Not that I can blame her....a majority of the pure blood families have shown to be a very infuriating blend of amoral douche lol.
and last but not least, this has been on my mind for a while and it has nothing to do with my review....but are there any Dominate female/sub female Vyk
"Then, to Harry's dismay, his friend cocked her head, sending the long locks of nut brown hair flying, before she said "I especially liked the part where she said how purebloods were trampling over the rights of everyone else... or was that the Mediwizard?"
A snarky smile worthy of a Slytherin curled her lips as a bark of laughter bubbled out of Ron. She was teasing, Harry knew that, but she was also and more importantly testing the men who held the future of one of her best friends in their clawed hands.
hehe Love it when Hermione's inner lioness decides to bare its fangs.
Hot damn there was sooo much sass going around in this chapter lol.
"Where's the honour in that?"
"Where's the honour in losing?" Draco asked back.
"Of course a Slytherin would say something like that."
"Guys!" Harry called out in helpless exasperation. "Could you please just try to get along? Or pretend to?"
I can just imagine Harry's "oh for fucks sakes you guys" face while this is happening.
I may have already mentioned it in a previous review but what I enjoy most about your story is how you manage to keep everyone in character while giving them some good development and how everyone is on par with everyone else. Allow me to explain, A LOT of "any slythern"/Harry pairing fics have the very bad habit of portraying Slytherins as the top dogs physically and intellectually and having them be jerk sues who rarely ever get whats coming to them and everyone else is given the "Ron the death eater" treatment(for further info on that go to http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/RonTheDeathEater). Was sets your story apart is how you give the Slytherin's flaws that Harry calls them out on and doesn't just forgive them because they look deeply into his eyes all smoldering like or some shit. Here you have Hermione going toe to toe with some politically savy silver tonged devils and managing to score some hits, hell even Ron manages to trump them now and again.
On another note Harry must be feeling really jipped by Narcissa right now. He is the sole reason she is not facing a trial right now and she turns and around and is making plans to screw him over. And I understand that Harry has a massive case of chronic hero syndrome and fully believes in Dumbledore's whole "everyone deserves a second chance" philosophy but good god.... the elder Malfoys have had Several chances to change who they are and keep making the same mistakes. Speaking of which I may have asked this before ........but did Lucius ever serve his full sentence from the first time he was arrested and exposed as a WILLING death eater and liar after the battle in the department of mysteries? You would think that after that a trial wouldn't even be happening and he would be sent right back to Azkaban with even more years added to his time. You would think that a guy with such a strong sense of justice would be a little more vexed that a man who once tried to kill him and his friends just might slip through the cracks. I just hope his feelings towards Draco and Blaise aren't influencing slight double standard.
It sucks seeing Draco so torn about it and we as the readers can see that he owes his parents jack shit. Ya really get the sense that Draco would have been a vastly different and better person had his parents given up the whole pure blood supremacy crap. I mean I don't even want to begin to imagine what school life will be like for him now that Slytherin does not have the same clout they did before the war and after a year in a death eater controlled school where Slytherins were probably the top of the food chain ya just know they will have to be watching there backs, especially Pansy. That haughty attitude of hers is gonna rub people the wrong way and there were quite a few witnesses to her attempt to sell out Harry lol.
Seeing as how Harry's friends have to go into hiding for the time being will Miss Crane perhaps have to go into hiding as well? Her ass probably has many people targeting it and it would be the perfect chance for her to see that Draco and Blaise aren't abusing Harry and it may reveal any ulterior motives she may have against pure bloods. Not that I can blame her....a majority of the pure blood families have shown to be a very infuriating blend of amoral douche lol.
and last but not least, this has been on my mind for a while and it has nothing to do with my review....but are there any Dominate female/sub female Vyk
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May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
To piggy back off of my last review, is there any chance...even the slight possibility that you could write an AU fic of this but featuring perhaps a Dominate Pansy/Sub Hermione Vyk
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May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was a really good chapter I was so excited when I saw the update. I was thrilled to see that Severus isn't going to go along with Lucius and the others but I hope Harry finds a way to use that article to gain rights for himself and future submissives as well as protect Blaize and Draco from the backlash. After all there is a very good chance that his children could be submissive like him and they might not be so lucky to find mates who treat them as well as Draco and Blaize are treating Harry or give them the same freedom. And by not gaining submissive rights he is leaving himself vulnerable since he will have no rights or freedoms other than what his mates give him and by law everything he owns belongs to his mates even his future children. I can't see Harry being happy with that hanging over his and his children's heads even if Blaize and Draco treat him like an equal. Anyway I'm really looking forward to the next update.
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April 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is in one word BRILLANT !!!!! I can not wait to read what happens next !!!
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April 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting story, can't wait for chapter 20 ^_^