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for Night Flight

by Massanie

person magentah
schedule October 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Agh! I'm grinning like an idiot while I shake my fist at you, Massanie! I'm shaking my fist, of course, because things are messier than before and I'm aching for our boys to be together and happy (however, I know that would also probably mean the end of the story, so.. please keep torturing me!). But, I'm grinning for several reasons: 1) Plot twist becomes twistier! I love that you keep me on my toes as a reader. 2) Yes, more conflict means more things to resolve, means more words to do all of that, means more story for me to read. Yes yes yes. 3) Happy ending! I can be so okay with everything they are and will be going through because I know there will be a happy ending! Thank you for setting my nerves at ease with that.

As for chapter 25, my heart melted a little at what Draco furiously won't acknowledge (even if he can't help but do just that) and the moment he and Harry had. I need to go back and reread the last chapter to remember how the blackmailer/kidnapper is still able to hear Harry outside (?) and to see if they're related to Blaise's uncle and the guardia or if I made that all up in my head. Hardships, having to reread this story. ;) (Totally kidding, I'm truly in love with this. I had never really considered Blaise before and now I can't get enough of these three together!). Thanks so much for sticking with it! Looking forward to the next update. :)
person Koneko
schedule October 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Will you continue? I like the story
person Anon
schedule October 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story has potentual, but it needs to be edited. It's difficult to read in places due to the 'unique' grammar. There's also a lot of silly typos that detract from your story.
person Lica
schedule October 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I trully love your fiction. I just wonder if Harry will remember that any interference in their mat, even if it is the aurors he can persecute the person... And he can't agree with the blackmail, Hermione and Ronald will not agree either... Well I will wait for the next chapter. Kisses
schedule October 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This chater Is super, the conflict , the realization of the past and promise of a fight.
person Kay Draccis
schedule September 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Cliff hanger of freaking doom! I'm kinda rooting for Harry to come to his senses, mate Blaise and Draco and then go and kick bad guy butt into the next hemisphere. Cuz we all know that if that doesn't happen then Draco and Blaise are so going to have to kill the bad guy, berate Harry and then when things settle, mate Harry. Can we tell that I'm in love with this story, and Vykelari? It's rather good and I'm looking forward to new chapters as soon as you're better!
person Jan
schedule September 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please update chapter 24 soon.
person Kain
schedule September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well......someone just signed their fucking death warrant, Harry is just going to collect the body. There is a list of things you just don't do, fucking with any member of the trio is at the top of said list. Ya mess with one, then the other 2 will find and end you. Very clever with the whole cant apparate onto a plane thing. Harry's rage at how callous and cruel dominants can be was brilliant and I am curious if that stuff that was dropped into his eyes in the previous chapter is making him more loyal too Blaise and Draco than he would usually be.

It would suck if this was all one big plot by the parents and they set things up so Harry would have to rely on Draco and Blaise to help save his friends and he would feel indebted to them.

-waits patiently for the next chapter-
person Mughain
schedule August 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is one of the most amazing, innovative and original fanfictions I've ever read (and I've read THOUSANDS!) It's just so well written, without being long-winded or boring, and I like how, even though there are hints and snippets of submissive!Harry, he still keeps in character without turning into a puddle of cooing mushiness. It's just great - and you've left it at such an awfully suspenseful cliff-hanger! PLEASE UPDATE! PLEASE! I BEG OF YOU! This is my new obsession! I can't live without more! DX
schedule July 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back, lovely chapter as always.

Whoever kidnapped Harry's friends DOES.NOT.KNOW who they have just fucked with lol. The biggest berserk button on Harry right up their with insulting his parents and some fools were dumb enough to mash it. As the previous article showed, harry is still very much beloved by the wizarding world and anyone who has the stones to screw with his pseudo-family had better be ready to go to war.

-waits patiently for the next chapter and constantly refreshes the review replies page to see if review from last chapter will be touched upon :D.