rate_review Reviews

I love your story, it isn't often that I have the opportunity to read such a well written, and well developed "triad" story. Thank you so much for putting the time and effort into creating such a fascinating tale, I hope that you will continue to update this story, I am waiting with baited breathe to find out what has been done to Harry. The personality of Harry throughout this story has been so endearing, to often that quality is lost in such stories, and the "inheritance/creature" aspect is so well done, the imagery giving a real feel for the characters as well as the creature traits.

I have just recently joined the ranks of your avid readers, and I have to say first and foremost that you are a very talented writer. I am truly enjoying this story, and am sincerely hoping for a new chapter soon. I love the way you have made the creature inheritance, so many times when people attempt this they change too much of the nature of the characters, but you have managed to keep them true to the characters we know and love. I hope to see an update soon, and if you have a list of those of us who would like to be alerted when you do update, I would like to be added to that list.

Oh the drama, I can't wait for chapter 28 hope it's soon ^_^

Omg!!! I want to know Harry is OK and get him back to Blaise and Draco. Please let him have some happiness!! Kill any slime ball who touches him.

So sorry to hear about your family problems! I hope they resolve as easily and quickly as possible, and will keep my fingers crossed for you and your family. Meanwhile, I am therefore doubly thankful that you were able to bring us an update in the midst of family troubles. I am shaking my fist at you for the cliffhanger, but only half-heartedly because you write them so damn well! Hehe. So, so glad Daphne is willing to help, although now I am extra worried for Harry. I know he's tough, but instinct and all count for a lot too. Yikes! That said, I have such hope for Draco, Blaise, and Harry as they find themselves on the brink of all falling for each other. It's a powerful point on the love/affection timeline and I will have to hope that the strength of those feelings will keep them together. I have to say, though it is resulting in chaos and Harry potentially being in pain, I do like the side effect this seems to be having of repairing some broken relationships and starting a very interesting Slytherin-Gryffindor/former Death Eater-good guy alliance. I like it. Sending all the warm fuzzies your way! I hope things start to turn up for you soon.

Great story --- I was enraptured throughout the entire story ----

and can't wait to read the next installment ----

when Draco and Blaise get together and ask for help from Lucius???? or get more help from Adler and Ives????

Obviously, these two teens need a little more parental(?) assistance --- not that Lucius has not given great parental advice and assistance in the past ----

but was that actually Ron and Hermione??? or just polyjuiced strangers acting as they would normally do in that situation ----

Please update as soon as life will let you.

keep writing as life allows.....

Need to know what happens. What was Hermione mouthing? Does Harry lip read?

oh I hope whoever is trying to force Harry to mate with the dominant will regret to have ever done so. He will kill them

Hello!
Just to say that your story is absolutely, incredibly, tremendously awesome! But I saw that your last update was in 2010, did you abandon the story? will you continue it ? please tell me that you will! it is such an amazing plot and beautifully written! I will help if I can ! correcting, giving ideas, anything! please continue this little jewel ! you have so much talent! anyway, tell me about your decision please,

and have a nice day,

Mazama.

I love this story! And this most resent cliffhanger has killed a piece of me. I want to stab that dumbass that is blackmailing Harry! Please update again soon and show those mofos that it's a bad idea to mess with Harry!

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie